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Ashes

Foreheads smeared with ash, pass me by on the street, smudge them, who came from ground and ground they will return. Earth to Earth, Ashes to Ashes, Dust to Dust, Ash me please for I repent, sweat of brow, my skin like a miners face, like a soldier, smudged to make him strong, to announce a fearsome fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2010 1:20:00 AM
Ive your most recent to here, and am working backwards. I love how your imagery emokes such strong emotion that transcends from your topic to our souls. I think I've noticed several with a particular twist of Irish politics and history. Am I wrong?
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Date: 2/18/2010 12:45:00 PM
Hey, this is very nice. Is this a Catholic thing, David? I think I heard of it before. An interestting topic to write of, especially if you posted WEdnesday! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/18/2010 11:41:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today David. I enjoyed reading it. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2010 4:12:00 AM
Very thought provoking write that you have penned here this day. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/18/2010 3:44:00 AM
This is a great poem, in a short form. Alot of the old customs are forgotten. Nothing would be greater to see a mass sack cloth and ashes movement.
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Date: 2/18/2010 12:45:00 AM
David thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/17/2010 10:47:00 PM
Well observed , David and well presented . We live in a Country , that needs much repenting , at the moment ......
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Date: 2/17/2010 9:23:00 PM
I really like this write its an interesting peace:) thanks for the comment on mine as well.....Aleera
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