Ashes

Foreheads smeared with ash,
pass me by on the street,
smudge them, who came 
from ground and ground they
will return.

Earth to Earth,
Ashes to Ashes,
Dust to Dust,

Ash me please for I repent,
sweat of brow, my skin like
a miners face, like a soldier, 
smudged to make him strong, 
to announce a fearsome fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jennings Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 1:20 AM
Ive your most recent to here, and am working backwards. I love how your imagery emokes such strong emotion that transcends from your topic to our souls. I think I've noticed several with a particular twist of Irish politics and history. Am I wrong?
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Hey, this is very nice. Is this a Catholic thing, David? I think I heard of it before. An interestting topic to write of, especially if you posted WEdnesday! LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today David. I enjoyed reading it. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:12 AM
Very thought provoking write that you have penned here this day. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 3:44 AM
This is a great poem, in a short form. Alot of the old customs are forgotten. Nothing would be greater to see a mass sack cloth and ashes movement.
Strand Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:45 AM
David thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
Kelly Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 10:47 PM
Well observed , David and well presented . We live in a Country , that needs much repenting , at the moment ......
De La Keur Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 9:23 PM
I really like this write its an interesting peace:) thanks for the comment on mine as well.....Aleera
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