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Ashened Fashion

Ashened Fashion

Once a fan of clothing passion
she sought to dress in ornate fashion
To wear a studded lamé skirt
to smile so sultry and to flirt
a gemstone bangle on her wrist
and necklace twisted made of gold
peirced nose bauble to behold

then came a time transient wise
to leave her body to disguise 
with less elaborate distress
a gothic realm of black and white
and Goth into another nest
to dissapear as black and night
her ashened fashion will unite 

Fashion Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Julia Ward
November 15, 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/10/2020 6:48:00 PM

I hope this poem is a winner for you Ralph. I really enjoyed it! xxoo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/21/2019 9:03:00 AM

This is so much fun! Good luck in the contest!

Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/22/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thank You, Rick!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/21/2019 9:04:00 AM

I prefer the earlier fashion. ;0) Flirty and fun all the way.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/20/2019 7:13:00 PM

nicely penned...in my line of work i see the teens go from beautiful fashion ins to the drabber gothic style all the time... enjoyed the read, nice rhythm and flow to it... :)

Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/21/2019 8:36:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sandra. My daughter has your name.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/18/2019 11:31:00 AM

Wow she sounds so fashionable and bejewelled and it reads and sounds so poetic and awesomely artistic how you capture her in poetry. Kudos for this splendid poem! Pls pleez do comment on my newest poem too. I would luv to hear from yah.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/20/2019 10:25:00 AM

Thank you very much S. zaynah. I will certainly comment on your latest poem!