Ashen To Death

The bite and taste
Of this victim so
Teeth marks, puncture holes
Not just my blood but my living soul
 
Ashen and drained
I become
Faintly i feel
My crimson life run
 
Pupils closing 
Light fading
Taken like this
Human degrading
 
Slowly i go 
To the darkened strife
A victim of 
The darkened life
 
Inspired by Illyianna De La Keur's " A Deadly Kiss "


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Al-Riyami Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 1:53 AM
Hm..deadly kiss, huh...Cool
Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 4:17 PM
Okay. Write on. Sara
Garavaglia Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 3:02 PM
Great Poem. Thank you for your comments. Cary
Goff Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 2:07 PM
James, the action in this thriller is wonderful! jim
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