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Ashen To Death

The bite and taste Of this victim so Teeth marks, puncture holes Not just my blood but my living soul Ashen and drained I become Faintly i feel My crimson life run Pupils closing Light fading Taken like this Human degrading Slowly i go To the darkened strife A victim of The darkened life Inspired by Illyianna De La Keur's " A Deadly Kiss " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/myth-fantasy.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/2/2009 1:53:00 AM
Hm..deadly kiss, huh...Cool
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Date: 7/1/2009 4:17:00 PM
Okay. Write on. Sara
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Date: 7/1/2009 3:02:00 PM
Great Poem. Thank you for your comments. Cary
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Date: 7/1/2009 2:07:00 PM
James, the action in this thriller is wonderful! jim
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