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Ashen Greys Erased

Ashen to grey clouds Welcome the horizon glow Graphite in erase

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 11/11/2010 5:54:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku Mr. nailed this one dear fellow ! I can see this on a greeting card with your Haiku on the inside...if you make one , I want the first copy ! *smiles* much love, james
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:00:00 PM
I could picture this image James. Beautiful (",) Btw I was dressed in a mini skirt with bunny ears and a red nose, the last time we did the Fun Run and the lights had a soccer theme last year cant wait to see what they got planned for this year ;)
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Date: 11/8/2010 4:44:00 PM
Quite a brilliant image of the sun's light penetrating through the "ashen" clouds, James. Wonderful haiku, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2010 4:37:00 PM
Well now James, that's the artist coming out in you as well as the poet. NICE ONE. -
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