Ascetic Life

my rage is something else 
lives an ascetic life- pathetic
glances about space
taking time to choose-
erase- delude & replace. 
come to me on your knees
whispering quiet submissive
"please" tickling my fancy, 
covering me in wicked delight.
i refuse to stop you & our 
fight is a merging (collision) 
bloody bonds, bared teeth &
shared defeat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 29, 2010 at 3:02 PM
This sounds very feline, I love cats !
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