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Ascent

Ascent Love, light, wisdom Known when our thoughts are still Bliss magnetism fills feeble form God’s grace Ascent Ego recedes We then know who we are God’s light in singularity Heaven

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/6/2025 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative double Cinquain write. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/20/2025 12:27:00 AM

Thank you, Paula

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/4/2025 8:24:00 PM

This lifts my soul to praise God for Who He Is... "Be still and know that I am God." to quote Him. And knowing Him comes from realizing who we are also in our low estate. Congrats, US, on the double cinquain.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/4/2025 9:09:00 PM

Yes, unless we do not recognise who we are (which is certainly not body-mind, identity etc.) in singularity, we cannot see God face to face with our inner eye.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/4/2025 12:29:00 PM

What a stunning double cinquain! I love the subtle use of alliterations too in some lines and what youv conveyed as always in such an eloquent manner! You can do any form and still write so profound! Pleasure reading you! Congratulations on your top win dear seeker! Sending you light always

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/4/2025 6:02:00 PM

Ah, thank you, IE, have a great day ahead