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Ascent

Ascent
Love, light, wisdom
Known when our thoughts are still
Bliss magnetism fills feeble form
God’s grace

Ascent
Ego recedes
We then know who we are
God’s light in singularity 
Heaven

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Paula Goldsmith

February 6, 2025 at 10:06 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative double Cinquain write. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

Unseeking Seeker

February 20, 2025 at 12:27 AM

Thank you, Paula

Reason A. Poteet

February 4, 2025 at 8:24 PM

This lifts my soul to praise God for Who He Is... "Be still and know that I am God." to quote Him. And knowing Him comes from realizing who we are also in our low estate. Congrats, US, on the double cinquain.

Unseeking Seeker

February 4, 2025 at 9:09 PM

Yes, unless we do not recognise who we are (which is certainly not body-mind, identity etc.) in singularity, we cannot see God face to face with our inner eye.

Ink Empress

February 4, 2025 at 12:29 PM

What a stunning double cinquain! I love the subtle use of alliterations too in some lines and what youv conveyed as always in such an eloquent manner! You can do any form and still write so profound! Pleasure reading you! Congratulations on your top win dear seeker! Sending you light always

Unseeking Seeker

February 4, 2025 at 6:02 PM

Ah, thank you, IE, have a great day ahead

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