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Ascension Day

We sat within the murky depths; belief just gripped belief's belief. But now we're up, we rise, rise, rise. Our stay there had been not too brief. But now we know our notions were a world once served by gods and heroes, something that was needed then, but now we thrive on ones and zeros. It’s such a welcome cheerful breath! For now we've ceased to drown, drown, drown. It’s such a welcome griefless breath! Those notions cease to hold us down. (7 Feb 2024)

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Date: 2/23/2024 11:13:00 AM
I like it a lot Andrew..' And you can take it Literally.'
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Date: 2/24/2024 2:07:00 AM
Thank you very much, Joe.

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