Ascension

Sunbeams stream through out
Forest overgrown and dark 
Ascending high heights

Entered into "Ascension" Contest
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Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 5:24 AM
im far from a expert when it comes to this form but i know this is a good write like the choice in words great job
Masciarelli Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 7:50 PM
Hi Audrey this is another beautiful creation of yours and it will truly touch many as it has with me today, I also want to thank you for stopping by and visiting me and for leaving a critique because your critiques encourage me to continue writing, Have a wonderful evening, God bless you always, Dean
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 1:29 PM
Hi Audrey, I'm glad I didn't have to judge those Ascension Haiku. It must have been so difficult to choose between so many great entries. Like yours! Lovingly, Dane Ann (Soupmail)
Strand Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 11:45 PM
Best wishes with this one Audrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome omments & kind words today.
Fraser Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 10:21 AM
Excellent Haiku Audrey, good luck in Raul's contest >> James
Kendrick Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Great Haiku for the contest good luck there. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 1:35 PM
What beautiful words, Audrey, and much luck in Raul's contest.. many poets entered this one.. mine is Midnight Mirage.. I luv this descriptive flow u use... glad u enjoyed my football poem.. some of us poets on Soup are getting together to collaborate on a rousing football tribute to our favorite teams.. if u want to be a part of it.. contact Carolyn Devonshire ... we are working together .. lets see what happens... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry.. much appreciated... luv...LMBPEPSS..
Owens Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Very nice Haiku...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
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