Ascension

Sunbeams stream through out
Forest overgrown and dark 
Ascending high heights

Entered into "Ascension" Contest

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John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 11/30/2009 5:24:00 AM

im far from a expert when it comes to this form but i know this is a good write like the choice in words great job

Dean Masciarelli

Date: 11/28/2009 7:50:00 PM

Hi Audrey this is another beautiful creation of yours and it will truly touch many as it has with me today, I also want to thank you for stopping by and visiting me and for leaving a critique because your critiques encourage me to continue writing, Have a wonderful evening, God bless you always, Dean

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 1:29:00 PM

Hi Audrey, I'm glad I didn't have to judge those Ascension Haiku. It must have been so difficult to choose between so many great entries. Like yours! Lovingly, Dane Ann (Soupmail)

Brian Strand

Date: 11/25/2009 11:45:00 PM

Best wishes with this one Audrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome omments & kind words today.

James Fraser

Date: 11/23/2009 10:21:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Audrey, good luck in Raul's contest >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2009 3:05:00 PM

Great Haiku for the contest good luck there. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/22/2009 1:35:00 PM

What beautiful words, Audrey, and much luck in Raul's contest.. many poets entered this one.. mine is Midnight Mirage.. I luv this descriptive flow u use... glad u enjoyed my football poem.. some of us poets on Soup are getting together to collaborate on a rousing football tribute to our favorite teams.. if u want to be a part of it.. contact Carolyn Devonshire ... we are working together .. lets see what happens... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry.. much appreciated... luv...LMBPEPSS..

Marty Owens

Date: 11/21/2009 10:36:00 PM

Very nice Haiku...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty

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