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Poem written for Illusku : Illustrated Haiku Challenge, JCB Brul, sponsor, July 24, 2025 ASCENSION ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ moon slowly ascends silver coin in well of sky glow smooths rough edges

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 10:40:00 PM

I agree with what Susantha said, I can't top that. Well done and good luck in the contest. Sara. Love, Bill

Susantha Herath

Date: 7/24/2025 10:22:00 PM

elegant, delicate, and deeply atmospheric. The imagery is both fresh and timeless, with the “silver coin in well of sky” line standing out as a quiet masterpiece. It captures a moment of cosmic grace and personal peace with impressive economy. A truly beautiful piece.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/25/2025 2:49:00 AM

thank you, Susantha, for dropping by and for your captivating and complimentary words about my poem. They mean a great deal to me. Wishing you a pleasant Friday.