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ASCENSION

ASCENSION ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ moon slowly ascends silver coin in well of sky glow smooths rough edges
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July 25, 2025 at 10:40 PM
I agree with what Susantha said, I can't top that. Well done and good luck in the contest. Sara. Love, Bill
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July 24, 2025 at 10:22 PM
elegant, delicate, and deeply atmospheric. The imagery is both fresh and timeless, with the “silver coin in well of sky” line standing out as a quiet masterpiece. It captures a moment of cosmic grace and personal peace with impressive economy. A truly beautiful piece.
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July 25, 2025 at 2:49 AM
thank you, Susantha, for dropping by and for your captivating and complimentary words about my poem. They mean a great deal to me. Wishing you a pleasant Friday.
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