Ascension

Severed by my angel
This victim learns to crawl
The experience grants insight
“An irony”, I called

There’s nothing left to hear me
And I must now become
The victim that regains life
And the redeemer of the sun

Lost wings have left me broken
The fall left so much hate
I steal an earthly image
I wear it to relate

Slowly I must stand up
Slowly I announce
“I am but your reflection”
And slowly I break out

I fear for those that see me
I’m frightened that they won’t
For everything I’ve witnessed
I’ve discovered what they know

Severed by their angels
These victims close their eyes
Embrace that they are dying
“An irony”, I cried
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 7:51 AM
Ian - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 8:51 AM
Ian - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Brown Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:19 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Mason Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 2:50 PM
I agree with Karen ... there is a lot to ponder with this write and if it stops me in my tracks and makes me think, its an excellent write ... smile ... not that I'm an expert here, but anyway Ian thanks for this one! and congrats on the feature this week!
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November 1, 2008 at 9:19 AM
Ian, I just wanted to commend you for a wonderful poem and offer you my Congratulations for being featured here... MPK
Jordan Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 7:03 PM
Ian - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless
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October 28, 2008 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations Ian on your lyric "Ascension" being featured. Vince
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 10:06 AM
Ian, Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
October 26, 2008 at 4:52 PM
Congratulations Ian on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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