Ascends New Sun - Andaree

Ascends new Sun- Andaree




When sparrows chirp, it's orange hue of twilight,
         Forgotten is yesterday's each fight,
                 Rise to another day's fun.
                    Leaves nothing undone,
                           Ascends new
                                  Sun.
                            Mystic view,
                         Be it for the pun,
                   Vivid dreams of everyone,
          Greens mesmerise, a colourful sight,
When sparrows chirp, it's orange hue of twilight.





Written Oct 14th, 2015
For contest by Andrea

Awarded HM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 21, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Dr Upma, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 4:52 PM
Beautiful imagery, Dr. Sharma. So nice to see your poem on the winner's list! Congratulations! Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 9:13 PM
this was a pretty poem . thanks for supporting my contest.
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 12:30 PM
lovely imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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