Ascending Descent

Jonathan’s fall had been so rapid down the obstinate pits

Time had not allowed him any chance to read the writhing

On the wall and he could not have deciphered the ancient 

		-Language of demise-

He had been below in that shoot so often and languished

On downtrodden trajectories of rock bottom squalor

But the symbols would have been hieroglyphic at best

		-Smudged in translation-

When all else fails ever more try falling he thought as 

He drew at a straw in a stack of delinquent pikes needling

His apathy desolation discomfort and a long losing soul

		-A shot in the dark-

Maybe Jonathan wondered that if he fell so often in 

Any case it might matter if he jumped on his own volition

Not to end it all but to gather new resolve in difference

		-Leaving indifference behind-

It has to be fast as not to change my ambivalent struggles

The pit looms now and I must seize the day before dusk

At least there would be some light for descent at the start

		-Before withering promise-

Better not dabble with the rungs I might need them for latter

I’ll spread myself wide once I am ready to nail those walls

Even a sewer might do when its only one long breath away

		-Until clearance’s escape-

In the underworld he came across a kind yellow slick road

On it a traveller not unlike himself and a union from heaven

As they floated dangled and drifted as they wedded their plight

		-In changing perspectives-

If Janka and Jonathan had never let go had not sought out the

Depths of their withering journeys had not taken momentum

Not knowing what another day would present in new dawn

		-Endless loops in perpetual motion-

Would have arrested stagnancy and stale morbid loneliness

The morale of the story speaks that un-ventured journeys down to

Where hell freezes over may be unpleasant but harvest reward

		-From the luxury of oblivion-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/10/2019 11:30:00 AM
nice write...sounds like directions for a long way round to learn something... to a desire
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/11/2019 4:11:00 AM
Thank you sandblown. Sometimes you need to go round in circles to arrive in the end. Kind wishes, Kai
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