As You Go Through Life

As you go through life,
Remember a golden rule;
To be loving and caring,
But be nobody’s fool.
Give as you live,receive too
For that is the way
To mature and be 
Your own person some day.....

Remember your heart,
But don’t wear it on your sleeve;
Use your head,be wise
Above all have hope and believe.
Accept what must be accepted,
Change what is in your power to do.
Yet be grateful for the little things,
Let life be a friend to you.
Grow in love,be loveable
Let others draw near
Without being a doormat,
Love cannot stem from fear.

Honour truth with all its’ beauty,
Never brutal or unkind.
So be sure to handle it carefully 
When sharing with others what’s on your mind.
Treat everyone as you want to be treated,
With respect and with care,
Remembering we all have feelings 
Though some may pretend
They’re not there......

Yet don’t take life too seriously
While you learn and strive.
Laugh,have fun,be happy
Know it’s good to be alive.
Take pride in your appearance.
Look after your health
And body too,
Aware of inner beauty-
Remember to always be you.
Especially follow your inner voice
For your path through life to see,
Then you will shine as a child of God,
And be the beautiful person
You’re destined to be.





I wrote this for my god-daughter when she was 13 at the request of her mum to give her a bit of guidance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bangalee Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 5:49 AM
great expression-Honour truth with all its’ beauty, /Never brutal or unkind.
Proxenos Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Love the spirituality of this poem Sylvia. A true inspiration for many.
Coulstock Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Jennifer for your appreciative words. June.
Wolf Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Such wonderful, sage advice. Ought to be printed in the sky where everyone could read it and benefit from it. Kudos! ~ Gershon
Coulstock Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Gershon. Take care. June x
Wheatley Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Good advice for anyone.
Coulstock Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Thank you Alicia. June x
Oimbo Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Sylivia you were my friend those days. This is a great poem. I remember those days you wondered whether I was a female or a a male!!
Coulstock Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 1:45 AM
Dear Honesty a lot has happened since I was last on Soup.It is great to be back as an active member.Thank you for your comment on this write.There have been quite a few changes here but I still remain your friend. June x
Wheatley Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Good advice for anyone! nice ink!
Coulstock Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 1:48 AM
Thank you Alicia for your appreciation of my poem-June x
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