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As Winter's Amazement Begins

Mugs of hot chocolate trickle down throats Snowman is built with a carrot nose Snuggled into our warmest coats Can't wait to sled as the snowfall grows Scrunching on boots over chilly toes On frozen ponds we all go skating Sliding our way through the ice and snow Colder weather anticipating Doesn't stop us don't you know Mother Nature's putting on a show Now we come inside to get warm Build ourselves a cozy fire We are watching the blanketing storm The beauty of which we never tire Extravaganza we so admire! Fall is so lovely but when it wanes Winter's wonders are welcomed in Like snowflakes on the window panes As another season does begin We dress up warm,hug each other and grin! * for Carol Brown's "Welcoming Winter" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/28/2010 7:02:00 PM
Very pretty and enticing poem on winter's joy. congratulations Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/28/2010 5:49:00 PM
congratulations on your win here with reality for you --memories for me, Deb. Enjoy your win.
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your big win in Carol's cool contest with this exceptional entry on welcoming Winter ..my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on the win for this excellent entry in the contest, Deb
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:23:00 PM
"Congratulations Deb!" On a beauty for it's worthy recognition in Carol's great contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:01:00 PM
I'd be pleased to say goodbye to winter if I could see snow, Deb. (Too hot here in FL and snow is rare.) Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Welcoming Winter"contest Deb. Love, Carol 11/28/2010
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:51:00 AM
very nice my friend
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Date: 11/19/2010 11:13:00 PM
Autumn and Winter are my favorite seasons, and this poem just confirms it for me! Beautiful imagery! Good luck on the contest! This sounds like a winner!
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:26:00 AM
it seems to me that winter must be very pleasant
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Date: 11/15/2010 6:18:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this very warm and inviting work..Makes me want to be there just for a little while..Sara
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Date: 11/5/2010 10:15:00 PM
I love the south and the warmer weather, but have always been jealous of places which have snow at least occasionally. A very well written poem. Charles
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Date: 11/1/2010 5:50:00 PM
Great poem and you made it sound so easy. Should be a high winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/1/2010 1:55:00 PM
Excellent Deb!!!!! perfecty setting for winter..Love Michael
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:46:00 AM
Great job with this Rhyme, Deb. Love the imagery..Although Falls my favorite season, winter brings on the excitement of a white Christmas, always great joy for me. Best of luck in Carol's "Welcoming Winter" Contest. Love, audrey
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:20:00 AM
that was just lovely Deb, good luck in the contest
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