As We Met

As We Met
                             
        A glimpse of you in a wonderful day
        Brought storm and I was swept away
        Crept and crawled in depth of your gaze
        Devastated, drowned and flown in craze
        Enchanted with charm in every breath
        Fascination urged even to embrace death.
        Glory of emotion reached perfection
        Heaven stepped down on destination.
        Illuminated my heart, soothed my, soul.
        Journey of life turned bright to reach goal.
       Knocked my conscious and sub conscious desire
       Lightening of love flashed on mind- sky entire.
       Motionless, speechless I stared
       Not even a smile I dared.
      Overwhelmed fully and felt narcotic
      Passion was oozing making me lunatic.
      Quenched my thirst on your glance to absorb
      Ripples of excitation dancing on each heart throb.
      Strange sappiness longed for manifestation
       Thrilled to sense a heart-piercing expectation
       Utmost longing to speak a syllable
      Ventured by me but was not viable.
     Wobbling swayed, I could not approach her
     'X' in my equation of love was not solved either 
      You came forward haply to hold my hand.
      Zeal won before I could understand. 
                       
  Love for Movie Screens Contest by Silent One.  

' All Yours (Mar 4 ) Contest by Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/19/2021 2:33:00 PM
Wow this is so clever! Starting each line with each letter of the alphabet too! This must have been quite a challenge! It's amazing (thumbs up- smily)
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Date: 10/5/2017 7:43:00 AM
Wonderfully-penned and beautiful write, Anisha - enjoyed it very much! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations Anisha on your fine win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:20:00 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:33:00 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:16:00 AM
Congrats Anisha!
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Date: 10/4/2017 6:54:00 AM
An excellent abecedarian..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/30/2015 7:21:00 AM
This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/6/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thanks Funom Anisha D
Date: 10/25/2015 3:34:00 PM
Congrats... SK
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/6/2015 10:42:00 PM
Thanks SKAT A. AnishaD
Date: 10/22/2015 5:37:00 PM
Anisha... I really love your love poem. It reminds me of my love story.. too sad it's over now.. :O(( But anyways, I'd like to send my biggest CONGRATULATIONS for a job well done!!! :O) Thanks for joining!! _Aiyah
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/6/2015 10:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Alyah I honor your feelings Anisha D
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