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As We Dance

In the sky less stars tonight But who needs shards of light when the sparkle in your heart ignites fire in the alley of my mind. I close my eyes, just to feel me swinging in your arms I trust to fall knowing you will hug me tightly as we dance Under a sky void of light, my sweet Psyche, my soul I keep your world upright. The darkness now bright, truth streaming from deep behind those wonton eyes. My heart has been ignited by the comfort of your mind as we dance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 2/23/2015 1:36:00 AM
I love this,,,,, thank you for reading my Flickering Shadows :)
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:52:00 PM
This is truly a stunning, amazing piece! With such beauty, I can feel the romance oozing from your words!Pandita
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Date: 11/8/2014 11:53:00 PM
this is a great way to be dancing. With such a partner as this, I would be in seventh heaven!!
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Date: 11/8/2014 8:28:00 AM
Your Arrow hit the mark with this beauty!
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:52:00 AM
- Enjoy reading this lovely poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/7/2014 12:34:00 PM
love it
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Date: 11/5/2014 10:13:00 PM
I love the phrase "wonton eyes" . . . your poem igniting heat and light in my heart! I ready to dance the night away! Nicely done.
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Date: 11/5/2014 8:28:00 AM
excellent pen dear friend very beautifully painted piece
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Date: 11/4/2014 4:10:00 PM
oh what awesome imagery in the first few lines - you sure have your dancing shoes on - great write my friends:-) Hugs Jan xx
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