As We Be Breathed

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One night from deep sleep I awoke, stirred by a light that gently spoke, oozing love, seeking my consent, for my soul’s heavenward ascent. No sooner I nodded my head, into the vast void, I was led sans form, for I had vaporised, truth of oneness clearly apprised, feeling God’s breath in-dwell each form, felt within as magnetism warm. My formless presence, one with God, gripped by bliss mists stood overawed in this knowing transcending mind, free at last from fetters that bind. This is the wisdom I can share, with pure hearts who so choose to pair. 12-August-2022 The Epiphany That Changed Your Life Forever Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/13/2022 10:08:00 AM
Utterly charming Lay filled with deep serenity Seeker! A dream-like rhapsody sung with God. There is such a feeling of peace and love in your words. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you!
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Date: 9/13/2022 6:10:00 PM
Thank you dear Sam! Such is as it is!
Date: 9/6/2022 10:48:00 PM
Great God Experience. Beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/7/2022 2:56:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 8/12/2022 6:59:00 PM
I am wondering the same thing; I am still seeking him. I will name you the US in future. I loved the poem you penned and hope you will forgive this demented 85-year-old duck for renaming you. Take care—the Old Duck.
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Date: 8/12/2022 8:49:00 PM
Hahaha! No worries :)
Date: 8/12/2022 5:46:00 PM
I loved this, Richard. Poetry from the heart and soul is very life-changing, indeed. I think this is pure poetry, a winner for sure.
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Date: 8/12/2022 6:26:00 PM
Thank you Shirley! … Wonder who Richard is? :)
Date: 8/12/2022 12:48:00 AM
Attached to this world we are bound too doom. But getting rid of our fetters leads us to God.
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Date: 8/12/2022 6:25:00 PM
True, Victor and yet earth life tests, time and again until we’re love enabled
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