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As We Age

As we age, certain things change drastically
Our hearing gets more acute dramatically
Other things decline
Things don't align
One eye looks south, one looks right enthusiastically

Copyright © Jack Ellison | Year Posted 2019

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Cecilia Macfarlane

October 29, 2019 at 5:37 PM

Love your limericks Jack, this one didn't disappoint, made me smile. Hugs

October 29, 2019 at 7:53 PM

WOW!!! Thanks a bunch, Miss Cecillia!!! Love from the old guy!!! XOX

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 27, 2019 at 9:09 AM

Heh, I have someth'n one looking south the other to my right, not my eyes though ;D, xomo!!!!!

October 27, 2019 at 12:05 PM

LOL I think I can guess but I love you "enthusiastically"!!! Lovesies, Happy Jack XOX

October 27, 2019 at 9:27 AM

LOL Do you mean nccbckgey!!!!! REALLY??? Have you tried to market it??? Love Jack XOXOX

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