As Time Went By - So Did We

Seconds:
If there was a second I didn't think about you
God himself would have to point it out
Because this sample of heaven is 24/7
As the minutes tick on since you been gone
I sit and think on all the things I did wrong 
Every second I ask myself two things: why and where
why didn't I realize what I had harmed
and where for the club, I was there instead of with you in my arms

Minutes:
For every minute I spent with you I remembered
like when we first met in September
The minutes that we slow danced together
Are energies collided and warmed my heart despite the cold weather
Every minute with you I was on cloud nine
There was no question, I was yours and you were mine
It was through those minutes, sixty-seconds was expanded
With you it gave the affection I had so long demanded

Hours:
I will dedicate the hours to what is present
For it is through the hours of thinking that I learned my lesson
The hours since we've been apart
They have pushed and pulled on my heart
Through the hours I remember what once was
How this simple lust could have been love
For every hour, my lips mouth the four syllables of your name
Even if time froze, I would still do the same
Money can't compare to what love can bring in a lifetime
Who wants to be a millionaire?
I was once one, but I didn't need three lifelines
All I needed was you to see me through
My rough days and longest nights
With you, darkness came to the light

In conclusion, to every second, minute, and hour I write to, Know that I still think of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lindley Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Great poem. One that keeps the reader advancing down the page to get the next verse! Super 7 on this gem! A7
Wash Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 8:32 PM
Love can grip ones mind like the clinching of teeth. Nice poem
Breidenthal Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:42 PM
First of all, you have established a fantastic structure to this heartfelt piece. it is unique and I am impressed. Thanks for posting and also thank you for the sweet comment on my poem "Speak". You are very kind. Always, Laura
Clemons Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 8:09 PM
Thank you Laura. Appreciate the love.
Browning Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Deep, I could read this all day. Enjoyed Jiril.
Clemons Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 6:36 PM
Thanks Landon. Appreciate the love.
Schaffer Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 5:46 PM
You weren't wrong. I do enjoy it :) - Emmy xoxo
Clemons Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 6:36 PM
Thanks Emily.
A  Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 10:55 AM
I love the style, and pace Jiril, a very precious thought and feeling. Amazing flow and rhyme. Hugs* SKAT
Clemons Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Thanks SKAT A.
Brewer Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 3:57 PM
Very touching,heartfelt, I loved it.
Clemons Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Thanks Jenny. Appreciate the love.
Graham Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 9:11 AM
In the club and way beyond Jiril, being swept away in the moment ...
Clemons Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 2:56 PM
Thanks Patricia. Appreciate the love.
Sister Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 9:49 PM
This touched me and reminded me of those past loves gone but not always forgotten. Lovely write. Thanks for the comment today. Made me smile. J
Clemons Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 10:18 PM
Thanks Jennifer. Appreciate the love.
Murphy Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 5:56 PM
this brought a tear to my eye. truly touching poem. -Jasmine Murphy
Clemons Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Thanks Jasmine.
Cannon Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 2:49 AM
I believe that certain people are brought into our lives to learn from or teach or maybe both - great poem! Thank you for commenting on mine
Clemons Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Jan. Appreciate it
Bessel Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 8:43 PM
Deep poetry, from The heart
Clemons Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Thanks Robert. Appreciate it.
Duncan Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 2:25 PM
I can relate to this one,,,,, was with the same guy for 17 yrs,,, these are for sure the thoughts that go thru a persons mind ;},,, You were right, I might find something I like. Well done . Thank you for liking my Floodgates ;}
Clemons Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Thanks Debbie. Appreciate the love.
Posey Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 7:18 AM
very well written and beautifully expressed. Unique in its presentation and it touched my heart... Great writing.... I can tell that you will like many of my entries..... Jake
Clemons Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 7:43 AM
Thanks John. Appreciate the love. Your right, I did.
Chafer Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 2:04 PM
I really enjoyed reading this one, you were right I did find some I liked :)
Clemons Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Thanks Amber. Appreciate the love.
Macfarlane Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 6:48 PM
The counting of the seconds, minutes and hours shows how much you love her and regret losing her....you touched my heart. Beautiful words. Hugs
Clemons Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Thanks Cecilia. Appreciate the love.
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July 10, 2013 at 8:39 PM
WOW! This i very beautiful and very romantic, I just loved it. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla
Clemons Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 9:07 PM
Thanks Lucilla.
Thomas Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Wow a very deep-rooted poem jiril, time is such a precious commodity, especially when it comes to love and loss of love, & everything in between when it comes to relationships....its a teaching & growing process. Which can be 1 of the worse pains ever:( I enjoyed reading,, ty4sharing & also commenting on a piece of foil, really appreciate your comment:0)
Clemons Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 8:52 PM
Indeed. Thanks Cherie
J.T. Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 7:26 PM
This is a well-written and heartfelt poem. Good job
Clemons Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 10:15 PM
Thanks bruh.
Honeytip Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 5:11 PM
I love this :-D Very poignant structure and sentiment. Love lost or unrequited certainly does put you through the wringer..doesn't it?....Thank you for sharing.....love Roobs :-)
Clemons Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Yes, very much love lost. Thanks for reading. Appreciate the love. Peace.
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 1:26 PM
- Jiril, a very well written poem....time passes too quickly - No, I do not want a lot of money .... can not buy love or friendship !!! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Clemons Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 1:36 PM
Thanks Anna Lisa, you have a nice weekend as well.
Dunn Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 7:27 PM
Nicely written and well said thank you for sharing this write.
Clemons Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Thanks Cherl.
Harrell Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:27 PM
Ohh, so sweet, Jiril. Hope you will reunite with her some day. That's what love is. Enjoyed!
Clemons Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Toguyen.
Anglesey Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:22 PM
I like where you went with this...seconds, minutes, hours... a long time to think about what went wrong. Your poem conveys the emotion of realizing too late what could have been great. A tough pill to swallow. :)
Clemons Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Thanks Karen.
Lawrence Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:14 PM
Longing for that 'one'. Seem to never forget do we?
Clemons Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:50 PM
So True, Kirin. Appreciate the read.
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