As Time Goes By

Born in cloak of modesty, life toddles, yet thrives
Musing of blissful eternity in domain of paradise
Befriending and beholding its virtuous design
Facing triumphs and failures of quests worthwhile

From first breath to last it's a long thrilling ride
As love and desires rule trappings of eager minds
And will to acquire wealth demands equal time
While allure of fame ignites latent spark inside

As maturity gains wisdom it begins to ask why
Things that were treasured once, now fail to satisfy
And glitter that charmed then, now burdens eyes 
When meaning of life changes as time goes by

And memories then bemoan venues forgone:
Failing to sail the oceans when tides were calm,
Forsaking kiss of love when nights twinkled stars,
Ignoring golden aura when fervid was the dawn

Precious become moments waning to end the game
When tallies are made of words said and unsaid--
Some seek reconciliation, some still burn the flame,
Some that meant so much, no longer mean the same

July 28, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/8/2022 4:44:00 AM
"Things that were treasured once, now fail to satisfy And glitter that charmed then, now burdens eyes When meaning of life changes as time goes by"..... How true ! With age our priorities shift and what were once considered vital turn so insignificant. We then begin to moan over opportunities missed and love that could have been kindled in brighter glow. But time doesn't wait for anyone ! Beautifully expressed. I salute the great poet and philosopher in you.
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Date: 8/5/2019 9:21:00 PM
This was beautifully done, I love this line, "Ignoring golden aura when fervid was the dawn"; great description. You've painted a wonderfully vibrant word-painting.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 7:24:00 AM
Happy to read your kind feedback--much appreciate..many thanks, MLK.
Date: 8/5/2019 10:29:00 AM
The day open us to a new sight and renewal of ourselves, blessed if we walk forward with good heart for all.. hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 7:23:00 AM
So true and well said, Eve. Much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 8/4/2019 5:17:00 AM
Very insightful poem, Vijay: Such truthful observations. A real gem of wisdom. Hugs, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thank you SuZ..much appreciate.
Date: 8/3/2019 6:46:00 AM
Vijay, your poem shines beautifully.. Certainly touched me, my friend.. You delivered a profound message of truth.. Amazing wisdom! A Fav for me.. Have a blessed day!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 7:22:00 AM
Much appreciate..thank you Robertina.
Date: 8/2/2019 8:41:00 AM
You are most welcome Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 8/1/2019 11:44:00 AM
A poem written by a poet whose own wisdom is a beacon for us all. Thank yo. Panagiota
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 7:22:00 AM
Much appreciate, Panagiota--many thanks.
Date: 8/1/2019 10:44:00 AM
Hi Vijay, You describe life and living, growing up, maturing, words said then, now have lost meaning, appreciation of simpler things in life comes easier, we see beauty now where we would never have seen it before, our music tastes change, we look forward to enjoying tomorrow and don't plan far ahead , a blessed poem, a wonderful write and an inspirational gem my friend - a fav. for me. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/2/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thank-you Vijay - a very kind and thoughtful reply!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2019 11:43:00 AM
My compliments for writing such lengthy and delightful feedback to many you visit on this site..kudos for the enthusiasm you display with your cheerful comments. Much appreciate, Jennifer..many thanks.
Date: 8/1/2019 8:32:00 AM
With Time comes wisdom and when we embrace the changes instead of dread or fear them life becomes a joyous adventure. I love this intuitive wonderfully written poem that sparkles like a diamond in its wisdom Vijay. A fave for me! : ) xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2019 11:28:00 AM
Such a pleasure to read kind remarks..especially from you, Connie. Much appreciate--many thanks. And special thank you for the fave.
Date: 7/31/2019 10:28:00 AM
Nothing is ever the same.. either with loss or gain, none is the same! A huge gain despite a huge pain.. we grow, we change.. everything acquires a new colour and taste! What used to fill the heart and the mind, now we are strides away seeking to satisfy a thirst.. that's the beauty and mystery of Life! That's the fine threat that tightly bonds us to a thrilling Life! Dear Vijay, You have exquisitely rendered your insights in a beautiful work of art with a sad flair.. a gem to fave and cherish..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2019 7:24:00 AM
Delighted by your insights and analytical prowess my friend..always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks, Besma. And special thanks for the FAVE.
Date: 7/31/2019 8:26:00 AM
A very interesting contemplative piece.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2019 7:21:00 AM
Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.
Date: 7/30/2019 2:07:00 PM
Hi Vijay. This is so beautiful, so true and so poignant. I share the sentiments written here. You have captured life. Best wishes. Deb
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2019 7:21:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, Deb.
Date: 7/30/2019 9:35:00 AM
Such beautiful writings my friend...Vijay the Poetic DJ lol...sending poetic love...^WW^ :o)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2019 7:21:00 AM
Thank you WW--much appreciate.
Date: 7/29/2019 4:30:00 PM
Love this beautiful poem, Vijay, the flow and the message, superb..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2019 2:46:00 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback Harry--much appreciate.
Date: 7/29/2019 3:05:00 PM
superb work so arresting as our life stages do change in different phases of life... beautifully penned, vijay... huggs
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Date: 7/30/2019 2:46:00 PM
Much appreciate, Nette--many thanks.
Date: 7/28/2019 10:15:00 PM
"As time goes by" Many moments are caressed, memories are made. Emotions linger and the heart is content- yet aches all at the same time. You have expressed this so beautifully. Blessings are Everywhere, if one stops to truly embrace them. Your thoughts always move me. Vijay!! Welcome back my friend. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2019 6:16:00 AM
You are so right--blessings are everywhere. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always, Brandy..many many thanks.
Date: 7/28/2019 1:38:00 PM
so wistful this is. The last verse really just said it all, Vijay. So sad when things that meant so much can one day not have the same meaning. But such is the way of life.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2019 6:14:00 AM
Your analysis is spot on, Andrea--much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 7/28/2019 11:12:00 AM
You wrote this very well Vijay, so much truth flows from your poem...best wishes..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2019 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Joseph..much appreciate.
Date: 7/28/2019 9:56:00 AM
I will say Wow to this too! and also consider it a FAV . I can relate to this and it is so well written. Well done Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2019 6:11:00 AM
You are so very kind..much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Heidi. A special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 7/28/2019 8:18:00 AM
Well done...change has come...nothing remains the same anyway...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2019 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 7/28/2019 8:13:00 AM
- When everything is said and done, Vijay ... we have learned how to appreciate everything that happens at every stage of life :) - the timeline ... gives new fruits :) - A wonderful write, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2019 6:10:00 AM
Yes indeed..we learn as time goes by. Much appreciate your kind remarks..many thanks, Ann-Lise.
Date: 7/28/2019 8:06:00 AM
A beauty, Vijay! The most important are people... to love them, but also not to live in euphoria but in the love God has for us. I oft let the thoughts of grandkids go for the praise of my heavenly Father for me to cling too hard to my pride and joy will bring greater heartbreak. May we all live and end our days well!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2019 6:09:00 AM
So very kind of you, Kim..enjoyed reading your analysis. You are so right..people are most important in our lives..many thanks.
Date: 7/28/2019 7:20:00 AM
Life in a nutshell so masterfully put my friend, Vijay! Amazing achievement! Much loved! Welcome back!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2019 6:07:00 AM
You are so very kind my friend..much appreciate your kind remarks..many thanks.
Date: 7/28/2019 7:08:00 AM
The story of life so beautifully written Vijay. A most thought provoking write so cleverly penned - thank you Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 7/29/2019 6:06:00 AM
So delighted by your visit and comments Ann--much appreciate..many many thanks.
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