As time changed




The old widow exercised
strict control over her daughter-in-law,
although she had no income,
being dependant on her son for survival.

Her son knew the rules she imposed
on his wife were tight,unfair,and excessive,
but could not stop his mother from doing so,
fearing it was a sin to oppose her
and keep her unhappy.

Such was the outlook of many people then.

His wife,her daughter-in-law,
on the other hand,
had cherished hope that
when her son married,
she would control her daughter-in-law.

But atmosphere changed-
when her son married, her mother- in- law expired
her daughter-in-law controlled her.

( Ninth in the Poetry Contest "Duality of Motherhood" sponsored by Sujette Richards )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 11:06 AM
Wow! Quite the weaving of control! So interesting! I have not tried to control nor do I want to be controlled. Great work, Akham! Congrats!
Singh Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Thank you
Buhagiar Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 1:22 AM
Lively poem. Quite a surprise ending.
Singh Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 2:35 AM
Thank you
Devi Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 6:19 PM
There were several such cases in the past but with time things change
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