Home » Poems » Yanny Widjanarko » As Time Breakeven

As Time Breakeven

Past dweller healed by time Second hand ticked, curse expunged A fellow, awaits on twelve As arrived, nightmare has fallen “Only through time, time is conquered” -T. S. Eliot-

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2015 2:20:00 PM

(A 7 Clearly) ... NOW !!! :) .................. Sorry .... I think I forgot to give you :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/17/2015 9:49:00 PM

Thank you Anne! :D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2015 2:18:00 PM

- Really skillful writing, dear Yanny !!! (7 clearly) - Nice to get a visit from you today, thanks :) - You are in my heart, blessing to you both - Give Ken one extra hug today from me :) - Love and hugs grandma Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/17/2015 9:48:00 PM

Thank you Anne, I think, I need to practice more in using this kind of form. I lack in using an efficient words in a verse, glad to see you in this page as well, hug from me and Ken :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/17/2015 10:10:00 AM

Great poem and quote Yanny!

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/17/2015 9:46:00 PM

Thank you Rick, I joined a poem contest, and this quote line inspired me, I earned gold for it, yay! :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/13/2015 12:41:00 AM

Loved this! I wonder sometimes if I am the nightmare arrives at 12!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2015 10:11:00 AM

If so it must be a dark Comedy my friend.;0)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/13/2015 2:08:00 AM

What a great thought Arthur! Thank you for your visit today, have a great weekend :D hug, yanny