As Time Breakeven

Past dweller healed by time
Second hand ticked, curse expunged
A fellow, awaits on twelve
As arrived, nightmare has fallen
“Only through time, time is conquered”
-T. S. Eliot-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 2:20 PM
(A 7 Clearly) ... NOW !!! :) .................. Sorry .... I think I forgot to give you :)
Widjanarko Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 9:49 PM
Thank you Anne! :D
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 2:18 PM
- Really skillful writing, dear Yanny !!! (7 clearly) - Nice to get a visit from you today, thanks :) - You are in my heart, blessing to you both - Give Ken one extra hug today from me :) - Love and hugs grandma Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Thank you Anne, I think, I need to practice more in using this kind of form. I lack in using an efficient words in a verse, glad to see you in this page as well, hug from me and Ken :D
Lamoureux Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 10:10 AM
Great poem and quote Yanny!
Widjanarko Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Thank you Rick, I joined a poem contest, and this quote line inspired me, I earned gold for it, yay! :)
Vaso Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Loved this! I wonder sometimes if I am the nightmare arrives at 12!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 10:11 AM
If so it must be a dark Comedy my friend.;0)
Widjanarko Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 2:08 AM
What a great thought Arthur! Thank you for your visit today, have a great weekend :D hug, yanny
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