As the Wind Fades

Today, although the air is still, I find yesterday's essence still tarries along in the consciousness of my own mind yet gossamery is what once blew strong faded are memories of breathless sighs once carried on breezes of love's firm hold where summer never wiped dry her own eyes or saw her color fall in leaves of old reflections dance in the smoke of night's air shadowing the once exposed in her veil yet as the fog lifts, I still see us there naked in the hold of a breeze, less stale we linger in the thoughts of yesterday alive, only by memory today.
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Mcdaid Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 1:33 PM
very beautifully crafted piece
Adams Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 7:55 PM
thank you liam :)
Cooper Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 9:47 AM
beautifully penned.
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 10:34 AM
Thank you :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 4:21 AM
Excellent work on the topic of aging, memories, and longings..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 10:35 AM
Thank you so much Sara :)
Sathasivam Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:06 PM
Excellent. Very descriptive poem write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Thank you Ravi :)
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November 12, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Sandra, a wonderful sonnet. beautiful and amazing imagery.... xox~ LINDA
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Thank you so much Linda :) hugs
Fraser Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 6:22 PM
Very descriptive write Sandra,you captured the wind and breeze beautifully, blessings Carl
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:03 PM
thank you Carl :) hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 4:07 PM
your sonnet, without the iambic pentameter, is nonetheless genius!! It's a modern sonnet at its best, Sandy. You can write such a poem beautifully.
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Thank you Andrea...been wanting to write something... it was windy and cold today, the leaves are falling fast, trees are becoming bare...guess it was my inspiration! hugs :)
Horsman Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 4:02 PM
Oh i am reading some wonderful sonnets today,, and this is right there at the top...beautiful poetry
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:05 PM
thank you so much for your kind reply Harry...it made me smile this evening :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 12:18 PM
- Sandra, feel sadness .... but reading the beautiful words. - Well written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:06 PM
thank you Anne-Lise....hugs :)
Carroll Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:46 AM
Hi Sandra, Some good sentimental stuff here. Ken
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Thank you Ken for your visit and kind words :)
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