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As the Wind Fades

Today, although the air is still, I find yesterday's essence still tarries along in the consciousness of my own mind yet gossamery is what once blew strong faded are memories of breathless sighs once carried on breezes of love's firm hold where summer never wiped dry her own eyes or saw her color fall in leaves of old reflections dance in the smoke of night's air shadowing the once exposed in her veil yet as the fog lifts, I still see us there naked in the hold of a breeze, less stale we linger in the thoughts of yesterday alive, only by memory today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/14/2013 1:33:00 PM
very beautifully crafted piece
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2013 7:55:00 PM
thank you liam :)
Date: 11/13/2013 9:47:00 AM
beautifully penned.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2013 10:34:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/13/2013 4:21:00 AM
Excellent work on the topic of aging, memories, and longings..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2013 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara :)
Date: 11/12/2013 11:06:00 PM
Excellent. Very descriptive poem write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2013 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Ravi :)
Date: 11/12/2013 9:49:00 PM
Sandra, a wonderful sonnet. beautiful and amazing imagery.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/13/2013 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda :) hugs
Date: 11/12/2013 6:22:00 PM
Very descriptive write Sandra,you captured the wind and breeze beautifully, blessings Carl
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:03:00 PM
thank you Carl :) hugs
Date: 11/12/2013 4:07:00 PM
your sonnet, without the iambic pentameter, is nonetheless genius!! It's a modern sonnet at its best, Sandy. You can write such a poem beautifully.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...been wanting to write something... it was windy and cold today, the leaves are falling fast, trees are becoming bare...guess it was my inspiration! hugs :)
Date: 11/12/2013 4:02:00 PM
Oh i am reading some wonderful sonnets today,, and this is right there at the top...beautiful poetry
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:05:00 PM
thank you so much for your kind reply Harry...it made me smile this evening :) hugs
Date: 11/12/2013 12:18:00 PM
- Sandra, feel sadness .... but reading the beautiful words. - Well written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:06:00 PM
thank you Anne-Lise....hugs :)
Date: 11/12/2013 11:46:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Some good sentimental stuff here. Ken
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Ken for your visit and kind words :)

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