As the Wind Blows

As the wind blows and doors open and close love pours from my heart into an unknown 

location a constant fight against hatred as it tries to enter the emptiness in my heart its 

slowly seeping in to the invisible cracks in my heart which are suppose to be sealed a battle 

between good and evil is what I prefer to call it as my emotions jump up and down in a 

undesirable manner leaving my body in shock confused and puzzled at what’s really going 

on causing it to fight away good and evil leaving me virtually heart less being love and hate 

retardant but occasionally things seem to make it thru but it always seem to be hatred end 

of the totem pole which causes me to fight harder to block all things out for the unwanted 

feel of evil and the want for love which there seems to be none around leaving me heartless 

emotionless and with a frown wondering will love ever come around

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/2/2010 3:10:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup, I am honored to have you as a friend in a family of friends. May your work find the distinction they deserve here
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:07:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 1/30/2010 7:00:00 PM
Oh, that's so sad. I hope love comes to you very soon. Compelling write.
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