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As The Water Sleeps

As the water sleeps Amidst heavy silent rocks - A rare twilight creeps

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/9/2011 6:57:00 AM
thanks for everybody that read it. it makes my heart leap up ^_^
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations Jan, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:55:00 AM
Hello Jan Camille, Congratulations on your win in the contest. well done my dear poet As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:34:00 PM
Hey Jan! Great job, good to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems tenth place honored win! Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2011 1:18:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Jan. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:21:00 PM
Wow!Wonderful!Congrats on your win Jan----kashinth
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:44:00 AM
Cool how you put in some rhyme in here too, like that "rare twilight" too :) Congrats on your win, Jan :) - nikko :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write ... enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..this happy Sunday...
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:40:00 PM
I think this one is just beautiful, jan. Congrats for your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:16:00 PM
Very pretty Jan. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your 10th Place Win in my contest, Jan. And thank you very much for your support. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/24/2011 11:34:00 PM
excellent. I love how you did it!
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Date: 2/24/2011 9:37:00 PM
enjoyed the read here Jan.
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