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As the Water Sleeps

As the water sleeps
Amidst heavy silent rocks -
A rare twilight creeps

introspectionhaiku

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Jan Camille Tongco

March 9, 2011 at 6:57 AM

thanks for everybody that read it. it makes my heart leap up ^_^

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 11:10 AM

Congratulations Jan, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 9:55 AM

Hello Jan Camille, Congratulations on your win in the contest. well done my dear poet As Always, Shar

John Freeman

February 27, 2011 at 4:34 PM

Hey Jan! Great job, good to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems tenth place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2011 at 4:08 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

February 27, 2011 at 1:18 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Jan. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

February 27, 2011 at 12:21 PM

Wow!Wonderful!Congrats on your win Jan----kashinth

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 27, 2011 at 8:44 AM

Cool how you put in some rhyme in here too, like that "rare twilight" too :) Congrats on your win, Jan :) - nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 7:48 AM

Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write ... enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..this happy Sunday...