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As the Water Sleeps

As the water sleeps Amidst heavy silent rocks - A rare twilight creeps

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Jan Camille Tongco

Date: 3/9/2011 6:57:00 AM

thanks for everybody that read it. it makes my heart leap up ^_^

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations Jan, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:55:00 AM

Hello Jan Camille, Congratulations on your win in the contest. well done my dear poet As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 4:34:00 PM

Hey Jan! Great job, good to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems tenth place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 4:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 1:18:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Jan. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 12:21:00 PM

Wow!Wonderful!Congrats on your win Jan----kashinth

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:44:00 AM

Cool how you put in some rhyme in here too, like that "rare twilight" too :) Congrats on your win, Jan :) - nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:48:00 AM

Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write ... enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..this happy Sunday...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:40:00 PM

I think this one is just beautiful, jan. Congrats for your win. LUv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/26/2011 10:16:00 PM

Very pretty Jan. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 9:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your 10th Place Win in my contest, Jan. And thank you very much for your support. Always, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2011 11:34:00 PM

excellent. I love how you did it!

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/24/2011 9:37:00 PM

enjoyed the read here Jan.