As the Sunlight Gently Rises

~~~
You dance across a shadowed room
gentle glow
within your eyes
Consuming thoughts with soul ablaze
spreading sparkle
to morning's rise
Your trace ignites internal flame
with passion
and desire
Casting waves of rolling tremble
from a touch
of burning fire
Your heartbeat blends to match my own
as the sunlight gently rises
And a whispered thought within your arms
adds the treasure
to your surprises
~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Selfa Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:39 AM
As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Rex on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS
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February 6, 2016 at 6:18 AM
REX, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:45 AM
Greetings Rex. Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)
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February 6, 2016 at 2:14 AM
Hi Rex McCoy, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:37 AM
To add to Sue's comment, I could see the sun's glow slowly making its way up her naked body. I think you might like my poem that I wrote this morning,
Green Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Love it. Could see the sun's glow slowly making its way through the window and into the room.
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