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As the Sunlight Gently Rises

~~~ You dance across a shadowed room gentle glow within your eyes Consuming thoughts with soul ablaze spreading sparkle to morning's rise Your trace ignites internal flame with passion and desire Casting waves of rolling tremble from a touch of burning fire Your heartbeat blends to match my own as the sunlight gently rises And a whispered thought within your arms adds the treasure to your surprises ~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/8/2016 8:39:00 AM
As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Rex on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:18:00 AM
REX, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:45:00 AM
Greetings Rex. Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:14:00 AM
Hi Rex McCoy, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2014 7:37:00 AM
To add to Sue's comment, I could see the sun's glow slowly making its way up her naked body. I think you might like my poem that I wrote this morning,
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Date: 1/22/2014 12:11:00 PM
Love it. Could see the sun's glow slowly making its way through the window and into the room.
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