As the Sun Still Shines
E-very passing day,
D-arkest moment comes and goes,
D-usk just does the same,
I-t replaces the daytime,
E-ven the twilight follows.
O-nce the new dawn breaks,
J-oy due to fresh morn is felt,
A-fter the evening,
N-o more shadows and cold chill
O-f the night make you lonely.
Topic: Birthday of Eddie Ojano (March 20)
Form: Double Acrostic Tanka
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