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As the Sun Set

As the Sun Set As the Sun set on evening Tide —sinking slowly into the Sea— I envisioned Eternity with you, beloved, by my side. The rhythmic pulse of ebb and swell are breath and heartbeat of the Sea in intercourse with Gravity— the Sun and Moon’s amorous spell. The Elements are lovers, too (every Atom has a mate; they interact and procreate), and their offspring are our Milieu. Pastel rays of heavenly hue revealed a most romantic sight: the Earth’s rendezvous with Twilight, blushing orange, purple and blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2016 8:15:00 PM
Melie, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:48:00 PM
Melie, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/3/2012 12:10:00 PM
Well done Melie, a good poem - keep writhing my friend.You are welcome to reading some of mine poem.-oxox love Anne-Lise
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