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As the River Lies

Cerulean soft shallows glide
like lotic lullabies; gentle,
hushed.  Juniper hills undulate
breezy slopes, tucked tender Autumn,
where turgid pastels drift perpetual
atop the sleepless river - surface deep.

2/26/2017
Submitted for: The River Line
28 Words

Copyright © Phillip Garcia | Year Posted 2017

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Jc Hawkens Date: 3/29/2020 6:11:00 AM Congrats! And Thank you for this wonderful poem. Such a beautiful scene painted with lovely colors. Thank you. JC Hawkens Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 3/29/2017 8:48:00 AM Congrats Phillip, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest!! ;-) Login to Reply

Donna Roberts Date: 3/20/2017 8:19:00 PM Woot woot..where's my dictionary , congrats Phil lovely piece Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/19/2017 2:58:00 PM This is such a beautiful scene that you paint, Phillip. It magically transports me to another place and time - so serene and lovely! Congrats on a well-deserved win! A-7! Pandita Login to Reply

Doug Vinson Date: 3/19/2017 1:46:00 PM Hypnotic, Phillip, in such a good way. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/19/2017 12:31:00 PM Congrats on your win Phillip Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 3/19/2017 7:58:00 AM Congratulations Phillip, well done... Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 3/18/2017 5:15:00 PM You paint a beautiful picture Phillip. Login to Reply

Lynn Marie Date: 2/26/2017 12:23:00 PM wow..i feel as if I am staring at a painting just wanting to be still to absorb it. there is a stunning beauty in your words. magnificent writing, a pleasure to read :-) blessings, lynn Login to Reply Phillip Garcia Date: 2/27/2017 2:00:00 PM Thank you, Lynn, for your very kind comments. They're appreciated greatly

Daniel Turner Date: 2/26/2017 8:59:00 AM Your words transported me there, Phillip. Excellent poetry my heartbroken friend:) Login to Reply Phillip Garcia Date: 2/27/2017 2:01:00 PM Thank you, DT. And I'm sorry for my moon commentary last night ;)

Doug Vinson Date: 2/26/2017 12:26:00 AM Wow, Phillip..... Login to Reply Phillip Garcia Date: 2/26/2017 12:29:00 AM :) - you can say a lot with a measly ol' river