Phillip Garcia Poet Verse

As the River Lies

Cerulean soft shallows glide
like lotic lullabies; gentle,
hushed.  Juniper hills undulate
breezy slopes, tucked tender Autumn,
where turgid pastels drift perpetual
atop the sleepless river - surface deep.

2/26/2017
Submitted for: The River Line
28 Words

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Jc Hawkens March 29, 2020 at 6:11 AM Congrats! And Thank you for this wonderful poem. Such a beautiful scene painted with lovely colors. Thank you. JC Hawkens

Teddy Kimathi March 29, 2017 at 8:48 AM Congrats Phillip, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest!! ;-)

Donna Roberts March 20, 2017 at 8:19 PM Woot woot..where's my dictionary , congrats Phil lovely piece

Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 2:58 PM This is such a beautiful scene that you paint, Phillip. It magically transports me to another place and time - so serene and lovely! Congrats on a well-deserved win! A-7! Pandita

Doug Vinson March 19, 2017 at 1:46 PM Hypnotic, Phillip, in such a good way.

Joseph May March 19, 2017 at 12:31 PM Congrats on your win Phillip

Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 7:58 AM Congratulations Phillip, well done...

James Inman March 18, 2017 at 5:15 PM You paint a beautiful picture Phillip.

Lynn Marie February 26, 2017 at 12:23 PM wow..i feel as if I am staring at a painting just wanting to be still to absorb it. there is a stunning beauty in your words. magnificent writing, a pleasure to read :-) blessings, lynn Phillip Garcia February 27, 2017 at 2:00 PM Thank you, Lynn, for your very kind comments. They're appreciated greatly

Daniel Turner February 26, 2017 at 8:59 AM Your words transported me there, Phillip. Excellent poetry my heartbroken friend:) Phillip Garcia February 27, 2017 at 2:01 PM Thank you, DT. And I'm sorry for my moon commentary last night ;)

Doug Vinson February 26, 2017 at 12:26 AM Wow, Phillip..... Phillip Garcia February 26, 2017 at 12:29 AM :) - you can say a lot with a measly ol' river