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As the River Lies

Cerulean soft shallows glide like lotic lullabies; gentle, hushed. Juniper hills undulate breezy slopes, tucked tender Autumn, where turgid pastels drift perpetual atop the sleepless river - surface deep. 2/26/2017 Submitted for: The River Line 28 Words

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Jc Hawkens

Date: 3/29/2020 6:11:00 AM

Congrats! And Thank you for this wonderful poem. Such a beautiful scene painted with lovely colors. Thank you. JC Hawkens

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/29/2017 8:48:00 AM

Congrats Phillip, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest!! ;-)

Donna Roberts

Date: 3/20/2017 8:19:00 PM

Woot woot..where's my dictionary , congrats Phil lovely piece

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/19/2017 2:58:00 PM

This is such a beautiful scene that you paint, Phillip. It magically transports me to another place and time - so serene and lovely! Congrats on a well-deserved win! A-7! Pandita

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/19/2017 1:46:00 PM

Hypnotic, Phillip, in such a good way.

Joseph May

Date: 3/19/2017 12:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win Phillip

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/19/2017 7:58:00 AM

Congratulations Phillip, well done...

James Inman

Date: 3/18/2017 5:15:00 PM

You paint a beautiful picture Phillip.

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/26/2017 12:23:00 PM

wow..i feel as if I am staring at a painting just wanting to be still to absorb it. there is a stunning beauty in your words. magnificent writing, a pleasure to read :-) blessings, lynn

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/27/2017 2:00:00 PM

Thank you, Lynn, for your very kind comments. They're appreciated greatly

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/26/2017 8:59:00 AM

Your words transported me there, Phillip. Excellent poetry my heartbroken friend:)

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/27/2017 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, DT. And I'm sorry for my moon commentary last night ;)

Doug Vinson

Date: 2/26/2017 12:26:00 AM

Wow, Phillip.....

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/26/2017 12:29:00 AM

:) - you can say a lot with a measly ol' river