As the Light Fades

White doves flutter, dying words whisper
Silence becomes haunting and Angels Sing
A lone filtering light of soft glister
Casts fleeting shadows from a white dove's wing
This arrow of light pierces the dusk gray
On my knees, I shall pray for you, my love,
And touch the cold floor where your casket lay
Seeking unanswered questions, from above,
To find no comfort in your final breath.
Forgive me, As I taste this bitter wine
Release me, from a vow I once confessed,
By the shadow of your spirit, I'm blind

Poison drips from a bitter drink I've made,
Brings dark, Silent dark as the cold light fades.



12/4/13/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/1/2014 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking poem.
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Date: 10/1/2014 9:42:00 AM
Heartfelt and touchy write, congrats on the win, Frederic
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Date: 10/1/2014 9:40:00 AM
A very touching sad write. You handled it so well. A beautiful sonnet. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/1/2014 8:48:00 AM
an incredibly moving write Frederic I love the imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your number ONE win with this very moving poem. Blessings
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/19/2014 9:03:00 PM
thank you Connie for your kindness
Date: 3/19/2014 4:10:00 PM
Well done Frederic, i like the dark feeling left as the light fades... Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/19/2014 6:22:00 PM
thank you PD for your kindness
Date: 3/19/2014 10:16:00 AM
Hi, Congrats on your 1st place well deserved win. I brings to mind a Romeo & Juliet scenario. Best wishes Theresa xx
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Date: 3/19/2014 6:23:00 PM
thank you theresa for your kindness
Date: 3/19/2014 9:22:00 AM
Great poetic winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/19/2014 6:24:00 PM
thank you Sara for your kindness
Date: 3/19/2014 8:49:00 AM
you are on a roll, frederick.. congrats!.. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/19/2014 6:24:00 PM
thank you nette for your kindness
Date: 3/19/2014 1:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/19/2014 6:25:00 PM
thank you Dr Ram for your kindness
Date: 3/18/2014 10:03:00 PM
Hello Frederic, love the win... SKAT
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/19/2014 6:26:00 PM
Hello Skat, thank you my poetic friend for your kindness
Date: 3/18/2014 7:29:00 PM
Fredrick, congratulations on the win. Verlena
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/18/2014 8:09:00 PM
thank you for your kindness Verlena
Date: 3/18/2014 3:06:00 PM
This poem was very emotional and it moved me every time that I read it. A great write, Frederic! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/18/2014 4:38:00 PM
With graditude I thank you Kelly....Frederic
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