As the Light Fades

White doves flutter, dying words whisper
Silence becomes haunting and Angels Sing
A lone filtering light of soft glister
Casts fleeting shadows from a white dove's wing
This arrow of light pierces the dusk gray
On my knees, I shall pray for you, my love,
And touch the cold floor where your casket lay
Seeking unanswered questions, from above,
To find no comfort in your final breath.
Forgive me, As I taste this bitter wine
Release me, from a vow I once confessed,
By the shadow of your spirit, I'm blind

Poison drips from a bitter drink I've made,
Brings dark, Silent dark as the cold light fades.



12/4/13/
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Meier-Hans Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking poem.
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Heartfelt and touchy write, congrats on the win, Frederic
Yvonne Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 9:40 AM
A very touching sad write. You handled it so well. A beautiful sonnet. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 8:48 AM
an incredibly moving write Frederic I love the imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Congratulations on your number ONE win with this very moving poem. Blessings
Parker Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 9:03 PM
thank you Connie for your kindness
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Well done Frederic, i like the dark feeling left as the light fades... Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
Parker Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:22 PM
thank you PD for your kindness
Stephens Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Hi, Congrats on your 1st place well deserved win. I brings to mind a Romeo & Juliet scenario. Best wishes Theresa xx
Parker Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:23 PM
thank you theresa for your kindness
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 9:22 AM
Great poetic winning work..Congrats..Sara
Parker Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:24 PM
thank you Sara for your kindness
Onclaud Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:49 AM
you are on a roll, frederick.. congrats!.. huggs
Parker Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:24 PM
thank you nette for your kindness
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:17 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, frederic
Parker Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:25 PM
thank you Dr Ram for your kindness
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Hello Frederic, love the win... SKAT
Parker Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Hello Skat, thank you my poetic friend for your kindness
Walker  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Fredrick, congratulations on the win. Verlena
Parker Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 8:09 PM
thank you for your kindness Verlena
Deschler Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 3:06 PM
This poem was very emotional and it moved me every time that I read it. A great write, Frederic! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Parker Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 4:38 PM
With graditude I thank you Kelly....Frederic
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