As the Day Goes By

As the day goes by i will love.
As the day goes by i will stay.
As the day goes by i will not leave.
As the day goes by i will not change.
As the day i will dream of you.
As the day goes by i will love you forever no matter what


love jamie
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Mcdaid Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 10:22 AM
very beautifully painted picture
Sietesantos Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:12 PM
How extremely beautiful! Pandita
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August 27, 2014 at 7:39 PM
JAMIE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Sergi Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 6:00 PM
hi Jamie:, Welcome! A very sweet and positive prose. Thanks for sharing that with us.
Turner Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 9:44 PM
i know and ty and your wellcome
Mitchell Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 5:41 PM
That was beautiful. Looking forward to reading more.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 8:31 AM
Hi Jamie, this is such a sweet inspirational write. Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Warmest regards. Pandita
A   Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 8:27 AM
Jamie,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 20, 2014 at 6:40 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jamie - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Nance Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Oh no the webpage cut off your first line, you can go into editing and fix it and it will be easier to read, what you have up sounds emotionally powerful, would like to see it all :) Welcome to poetrysoup :)
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