As the Crow Flies

As the crow flies

I died. No child under nipple. No child under bib.
I died. Without ever having loved or been in love.
I died as the crow flies. Straight and placid.
I died. unmanned, in holster, uninhabited.
I died coralled up in moments, to tangeled to give an inch.
I died as the white birch tree lives.
I died in the desert. A sponge for the sun.
I died in a boat capsized in the ocean.
To small for the August Grunion run.
I died as the pen dries,
leaving letters undone.
I died up in fetters.
Rusted tension.
I died never forgiving my father, or mother, or anyone.
I died never apologizing to my sister,
the one they didnt want.
I died wrapped up in blankets
frozen to the ground. 
I died not crying for help, no telegram, no telephone.
I died never sending a single postcard home. 
I died never knowing my name or names of my friends.
Oh, i died, and i died
as if never have lived.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 7, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Donny, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
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March 19, 2016 at 11:51 PM
Hi Donny, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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March 15, 2016 at 12:49 AM
Wow, powerful stuff, Donny. Intensity in every line, with all the various imagined scenarios. There are so many lives that pass away unnoticed ... sometimes in tragedy, other times with a full life. What an intriguing take on this theme, as you don't even mention any of the words ... tomb, ancient, nor bloom. Respect the reaching out.
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March 13, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Wow! Didn't realize I won! What an honor!! Thanx guys!
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March 2, 2016 at 12:29 AM
Enjoyed your first poem, Donny,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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