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A Triolet To Make My Day - Revised Rules Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Written 6/23/2026

As Sunlight Slides Behind the Hill TRIOLET

As sunlight slides behind the hill
Lord, your kindness for all to see.
You love as our dreams do fulfill.
As sunlight slides behind the hill
Devoutly walk in grace with thee,
But bathe in the light; let us free.
As sunlight slides behind the hill
Lord, your kindness for all to see.
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Kauffman Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Eve, what a beautiful prayer and reminder of God's goodness. Blessings and congratulations to you!
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with your excellent poem, Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 1:21 AM
Sweet one , Eve. Congrats. And I see it won with Brian. Way to go
Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 2:29 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 3:57 PM
nicely done....made my day :-) best wishes with this contest entry.
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