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as sun sets

peach clouds feathery mare's tails flicked across the dusk sky randomly there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/17/2010 12:38:00 AM
Back here to my FAV!! YOu are too sweet to comment to my poems when I've already seen all of your posts! Goodnight now. I am nodding off. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:15:00 AM
This is a wonderful Haiku, a pure joy to read.. thanks for going back to read my ever poem "Faith".. always Michael
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Date: 8/10/2010 11:41:00 PM
Love it. A fav!
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:59:00 PM
Another lovely haiku..BG
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Date: 7/9/2010 1:24:00 PM
This has a breath-taking imagery. I love the tranquil setting of the sight. I could see the flickering tail of the mare, as joy comes forth with the setting sun. This is right on the money. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:52:00 PM
nice one,, I really like the last line .. enjoyed ..P.D.
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