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As Sun Sets

peach clouds feathery mare's tails flicked across the dusk sky randomly there.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2010 12:38:00 AM

Back here to my FAV!! YOu are too sweet to comment to my poems when I've already seen all of your posts! Goodnight now. I am nodding off. Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/24/2010 7:15:00 AM

This is a wonderful Haiku, a pure joy to read.. thanks for going back to read my ever poem "Faith".. always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2010 11:41:00 PM

Love it. A fav!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/8/2010 9:59:00 PM

Another lovely haiku..BG

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 1:24:00 PM

This has a breath-taking imagery. I love the tranquil setting of the sight. I could see the flickering tail of the mare, as joy comes forth with the setting sun. This is right on the money. Great job! Joseph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2010 5:52:00 PM

nice one,, I really like the last line .. enjoyed ..P.D.