As Sun Sets

peach clouds feathery
mare's tails flicked across the dusk 
sky randomly there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Back here to my FAV!! YOu are too sweet to comment to my poems when I've already seen all of your posts! Goodnight now. I am nodding off. Luv, Andrea
Falotico Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 7:15 AM
This is a wonderful Haiku, a pure joy to read.. thanks for going back to read my ever poem "Faith".. always Michael
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Love it. A fav!
Gorelick Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:59 PM
Another lovely haiku..BG
Spence Sr Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 1:24 PM
This has a breath-taking imagery. I love the tranquil setting of the sight. I could see the flickering tail of the mare, as joy comes forth with the setting sun. This is right on the money. Great job! Joseph
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July 7, 2010 at 5:52 PM
nice one,, I really like the last line .. enjoyed ..P.D.
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