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As Such Moments Are Passing

As such, moments are passing with happiness by my side why do I feel in life there’s something lacking side by side Relations, loyalty, friendship, with all I am glad What is the matter with me my heart’s feeling sad side by side Every moment is wonderful for fresh desires for life Dreams in my eyes I have and smiles on my lips side by side My desires are fulfilled, satisfaction too and longings too My heart has no complaints with anybody by my side God is merciful and compassionate with a big heart Why do I feel something lacking in my life side by side. 31.08.2020 Ghazal Poetry Contest Sponsor Silent One 14 syllables per line

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/6/2020 8:40:00 AM

Nicely composed. All the best. I have not tried yet as I am hesitating to venture in an unknown zone.

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/6/2020 9:33:00 AM

Thanks dear Anisha.....try it sometime....we are from the land of Gazals so should come naturally:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2020 4:20:00 AM

... oh. very well done, Carol ... a contest I do not dare to try ... (I think) ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/31/2020 5:28:00 AM

We come from a land of Gazals...had to put my hand to it... Thanks Anne-Lise :)