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As She Writes

` And as she writes her pen touches me as I cry poetic tears so that I may drench myself in her sorrow so that she will not have to cry alone

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Hello There

Date: 12/18/2019 11:57:00 PM

Wow, now that is compassion...bravo, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2019 8:22:00 AM

I appreciate all of the kindness you show me. You are always so very nice to me. Thank you my friend.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/17/2019 8:56:00 PM

This is a lovely poem Chris... Truly beautiful in it's simplicity and expressed so tenderly!

Chris Green
Date: 12/18/2019 7:27:00 AM

Thank you so very much Kelly

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/17/2019 1:35:00 PM

Very beautiful , Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 1:39:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2019 1:17:00 PM

- There have been many tears in this past month, Chris - Beautifully written - I wish you and your loved ones a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 1:29:00 PM

I know my friend. Too many tears for this time of year. Hope your holidays are special Anne-Lise.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/16/2019 7:58:00 PM

A FAVE, Chris. Reminded me a bit of Cyrano de Bergerac. Loved it.

Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 7:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much Line and for your help on that other poem.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/16/2019 6:38:00 PM

she wraps herself in a blanket of words, her tears dissipate as the warmth of your heart reaches out.... love this Chris...your words always comfort those around you... beautiful... hugs

Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 7:00:00 AM

I love your comment, so very poetic my friend. That makes this poem definitely worth writing.

Na Na

Date: 12/16/2019 5:40:00 PM

A nice overwhelming order to have ones back.

Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 6:59:00 AM

Thank you my friend.