As She Watches Me Think Via Challenge Mode

i am drawing a blank right now
the clock is sweating and becoming impatient
i see the dots and spots that formulate clots in the hollow banks of my memory

i am collecting the air as i write
the sky is dehydrated and becoming desperate
i notice that sags in my rags that causes invisible razors in the tags of my tattered clothing

i am draining my brain in vain
the walls are transforming into chatterbox chalkboards mercilessly tickling the tolerance of my sanity
i experience the faded scenes of genes thorughly dismantling the teams i once relied on to cope

all the while
blueprint rhythms pile
and go wild
every page emits rage
in a collective deluge of
escapades

i spin until the whirling 
air kisses my eyeballs
in multilples of multiplicity
then the mallet slams down
like thunder on a lazy sunday
my mind is set free, and no matter
the emotions in the middle of the pot,
i inspire a type of happiness in you in continuum....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/25/2013 6:14:00 AM
Woah splendid poem, yor rhyme scheme is impressive. Great visuals makes me tink hitech and sci-fi thoughts somehow. Pls do coment my latest poem
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:47:00 AM
S.zaynub, thank you for the comment. Hope you dug my other creations as well as those that are upcoming.... May God Bless....
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