Kim Hilliker Poet Pantoum

As She Spreads Her Wings

As she spreads her wings long and full
Being free - heart, mind and soul
She breathes effortlessly
Steady winds to help her soar
Being free - hear, mind and soul
A flight taken strong and bold
Steady winds to help her soar
Never minding what's in store
A flight taken strong and bold
She breathes effortlessly
As she spreads her wings long and full




For Catie Lindsey's Pantoum Contest

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Susan Mills August 18, 2010 at 8:40 AM Such a graceful and flowing poem. I especially like the last two lines! Thanks for commenting on my poem "Poetess." Good luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2010 at 11:48 AM I love how easy this reads and flowing, just like a little angel. Great job you did and I can't see that it won, but it sure deserved it! LUv, andrea

John Beam May 16, 2010 at 10:21 AM thank you for comment hope you do well in contest enjoyed reading really liked your poem on faith with love in Christ jesus

Carol Sunshine Brown May 13, 2010 at 4:24 AM I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today Kimberly. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. Always a pleasure to read. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2010 at 5:54 PM A vibrant, energetic proclamation of freedom, Kimberly! Great use of this intriguing pantoum form. Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 12, 2010 at 2:51 PM Awesome write and imagery, Kim. An inspiration indeed. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.