As She Exits the Stream

As I sit on the bank beside this clear running stream
I look on in awe as if I am in a dream

My girl, my love swims in the translucent so pure
Her curvaceous shape in the ripples allure

Breaststroke to backstroke as she shares with me
As the undulations of the waves caress her so free

As she exits the stream my eyes are in capture
My heart, my thoughts it total rapture

Her ebony locks cascade down her back
Whilst her body gleams for she doesn't lack

Towards me she walks through the greenest of grasses
My love, my girl the most beautiful of lassies

We lie facing each other sharing sweet meadow kisses
Our minds in unison knowing our bodies have wishes

Beside the clear running stream we shared each other
Under a canopy of green two souls in discover





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Devonshire Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Lovely images of the curvacious girl swimming and approaching you on the shore, James. Love poems are your forte'. I'm out of town for the holiday. Hope you are enjoying a nice weekend. Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 11:40 AM
awesome, absolutely love it
Neels Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Mr Fraser, me love your couplet..images are breathtaking.. I just love the way you leave the conclusion up to the reader in this one.. Hope you have a stunner of a weekend :) Wilma
Hales Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 10:00 AM
wowowoowowowow you are a passionate one james ..i love it sarah xx
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