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As Seasons Dance

Wing footed  winter’s dance is of grey skies,
bare branch silhouettes in silver gowns 
dormant magic within icy poses 
brilliant halls bedecked with frosted flowers. 

Into the Grand Ballrooms of springtime
a sweep of pastel ball gowns - all awhirl
Fresh pirouettes that gleam with  sparkling dew
To bring alive the dreaming garden songs.

Until the partners change at summer’s start
Now  gowns sway green- as green as willow boughs
And all the maiden’s heads are strewn with flowers
While love renewed replaces all past cares

Then as the leaves turn slowly - red to brown
All regal shades of velvet now adorn
The dancers bow - the way of beauty flown
Their hearts have pledged a promise to return.



CONTEST NO 470,ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 LINES
Contest Judged:  7/25/2018 1:07:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
6th. Place

Published in PS It’s Poetry Available on Amazon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 7:10 PM
Back with more congrats. So glad to reread this charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Congrats on your win, Suzanne. Lovely.
Gentry Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!
May Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 1:27 PM
An enthralling dance of seasons..Beautifully penned ..Congrats on your win
Delaney Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thanks Joseph: nice to see you again. SuZ
Watson Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 5:47 AM
The seasons were so beautifully conjured up, Suzanne. This line made a particularly strong impression : bare branch silhouettes in silver gowns
Delaney Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Thanks Wendy: nothing more inspiring than the changing seasons. SuZ
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Such lovely and very creative imagery you've created showing how our seasons dance through the year, Suzanne. I enjoyed reading this so much. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Delaney Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 4:47 PM
So nice to see you Sandra:Many thanks for reading and commenting. SuZ
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:35 PM
SUZANNE, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Congratulations on your win,Suzanne, beautiful poem. Bless you
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Very beautiful Suzanne . Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:00 PM
so beautifully penned with delightful imagery - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Sullivan Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 3:19 AM
Absolutely stunning Suzanne!
Austin Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 5:21 PM
I like the dance theme and the way you've connected the seasons. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 1:18 PM
love the win Suz.. LOVE --SKAT
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:07 PM
Hello Suz, , a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Lovely, Suzanne! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Arowolo Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Wonderful piece,Suz...Great write..Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest..
Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 8:48 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:02 PM
No need for an apostrophe. You have a plural not a possessive seasons. Joyce
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:00 PM
This was a sure winner SuZ. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Ludden Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 11:16 PM
a very vivid picture, which of course I have learned to expect from you. I would use an apostrophe with "season's" in the title here.
Delaney Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Hi Robert ....when I first posted this one I had an apostrophe But it kept saying no special characters allowed in the title.....will try again. Perhaps TPS has changed that in the upgrade. SuZ
Force Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 8:57 PM
I could almost invision the figures partipating in the dance of the seasons changing. Loved the words that painted the pictures, nice job !
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 7:19 AM
Marvelous freeverse personification of nature. Engrossing entrancing seasonal spells portrayd!
Ryerson Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 3:27 PM
So, may I have the next dance? Beneath a shower of Maple leaves...Then we could rake those leaves in a pile and dive in...Beautifully done my friend - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Awesomeness!! wish I could have cut mine down to a size like this one. You captured each season wonderfully.
May Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 4:28 AM
beautiful write Suz...best wishes
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