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Santa hasn’t drunk cocoa tonight,
and he’s not dressed in red trimmed with white.
In blue denim so cool,
he is toasting the Yule
with a drink surely not mixed with Sprite!

Santa’s drink was a little too red,
and I think we have something to dread,
for he’s now in the sky
and he’s flying “too high”
as his sleigh widely veers overhead.

Had been use for the Humor Contest of Carol Eastman

* Slab City is a snowbird campsite in the Colorado Desert in southeastern California, used by recreational vehicle owners and squatters from across North America. East Jesus is part of its artistic community.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/14/2018 1:07:00 PM
Andrea, I love great lims and this is a GREAT one! Congrats for your placement in the contest. Many thx for your kind comment re my entry and a Merry Christmas to you and your family - Bob
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Date: 12/2/2018 5:05:00 PM
Nice one Andrea..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 12/2/2018 4:31:00 PM
Lovely to read this one again Andrea, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2018 11:58:00 AM
So just how strong was the liquor that left Santa flying "too high." Loved this entry, Andrea. Competition for this contest was awesome and you did a great job. Thanks for supporting the contest with your witty verse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:10:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your top placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/8/2016 6:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Date: 6/8/2016 3:13:00 PM
Funny Santa,this one! Congratulations Andrea!
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Date: 12/24/2015 5:55:00 AM
Hey just looking over earlier poems...and this is tremendous....cheers...
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:38:00 AM
Great pic and juicy pen...this Santa looks part Merlin, part Da Vinci, and headed for happy hour
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Date: 1/12/2015 8:07:00 PM
Quite a Limerick, that from the picture, fits perfectly. Never thought about the drinking and flying thing before; who's going to take away his keys, or whip or ?
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Date: 1/3/2015 7:55:00 PM
Parsley in a bloody mary? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/3/2015 7:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. A beautiful poem of beautiful thought enjoyed from you. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/3/2015 1:10:00 AM
Congrats Andrea with this well crafted Poem, no doubt you have brought out your experience here to coast to victory. I could see the doubt here,a father Christmas or not? But as a great Poet that you are you beat the doubt and come out victorious. Kudos for a Job well done...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:52:00 PM
Andrea, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Amdrea! This was my most favourite in the contest!
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:48:00 PM
Oh! I mean Andrea! c: c:
Date: 1/2/2015 7:13:00 PM
congratulations Andrea on your win, bad Santa, No, No, NO,
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:27:00 PM
Congrats on this funny winner Andrea...I think Santa may be having a pre sleigh ride bloody mary in a wine glass :) happy new year to you
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:58:00 PM
Andrea, stopping back to congratulate you for your win. I loved this poem when I first read it! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:07:00 PM
HAPPY ON ANDREA DIETRICH's WIN
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:45:00 AM
Andrea, this was my personal favorite.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:10:00 AM
This is the second limerick entry I've seen and I must say that humour has found a fitting niche in this contest. Well done and sweet congratulations Andrea! [I thought the green was a white grape...but then, the wine is red!] // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. This is an amazing work, worth of recognition. I wish I could fav it once for every line.
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:28:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/2/2015 9:56:00 AM
Wow wonderful Andrea! Congrats on great win! Wishing u a very happy n prosperous new year 2015 ! Thnx for the visit to my page!
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Date: 12/30/2014 8:31:00 AM
wow so different, this is truly wonderful poetry,,oh and as for the green thing,,,,it is not inside it looks to be on the outside of the goblet
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