As Quiet as a Shadow


                                                 She was as quiet as a shadow

                                                               on the floor

                                                 Though she heard the voice

                                                  Of those who would implore

                                                      She'd answer in a nod 

                                                        Or in near whisper

                                             A shadow in the wake of every

                                                               Sister

                                              Her face was always buried

                                                           In a page

                                        Where her spirit sought the Muses

                                                      Who'd engage
   
                                        Her voice aligned somehow in

                                                        Universe

                                     Where she could speak her words

                                               Now verse by verse

                                     As quiet as a shadow, lest a script

                                         A personality to an actress

                                                   A sweet gift

                                 Then she would come alive and have

                                                      A voice

                                    Choosing carefully her parts

                                            A precious choice

                              And her hand was always nearest to 

                                                     A pen

                                Where her silent voice poured out

                                              Again, again

                                 Nobody could steal that voice

                                                From her

                                The gift that wrapped her in

                                         The Muses cure

                                Muse brought her a gift of

                                         Sweetest balm

                                    A gift within a storm

                                     That ushered calm

                           Then her quiet shadow danced

                                       Inside the door

                          Though quiet, never voiceless

                                           Evermore
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Sands Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 4:59 AM
This is excellent! A Fave for me. Nobody can steal her voice! :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 10:51 PM
I just saw this comment from you Heidi, I don't know how I missed it! Thank you! I am so honored by your fave :) <3
George Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 9:48 PM
Did you have Emily Dickinson- 'the solitary recluse of Amherst' in mind? Somehow I could relate this poem with her. Beautifully written.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 12:28 AM
Interesting. Dickinson was one of my favorite poets since childhood. I was shy after moving from a small town in the Bay area of CA, where I'd had lots of friends. Moving to AZ, I knew not a soul, I felt like a fish out of water! My sister Barbara knew I loved poetry all my life, as she'd always read it to me, and lent me her small collection of the classic poetic works, and I so identified with Emily, I read everything I could of her. By age 11 or 12, I too was a poet. So, though subconsciously, you're probably right :) I am honored by your comment, she is, of course, one of my favorite poets <3
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 2:55 PM
Hello Bj Legros Kelley, hello. so nice to meetyou. I enjoyed to read this poem. The muxe alys know what the poem would be. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 10:35 AM
Hello Bj, It is nice to meet you. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Thank you. My day is going well. I hope yours is to. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 12:33 AM
Nice to meet you as well Darlene, I loved visiting your page and reading your poetry. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem and appreciate your stopping over, as well as for your comment. I hope that your day is blessed as well! <3
Godwin Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:34 AM
Oh, BJ, GRAND, simply grand writing. As a child, teen, I was without a voice due to lack of confidence but around age 12 poetry sought me, called me and gave me a voice that I kept hidden for decades with some exception. I FELT THIS, just as I felt/knew God had gifted me the poetry, He had it call to me, and He led me to your pages. Blessings, all.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 12:54 AM
It would have been nice to know you then as I didn't know any poets of my age, but probably it was our shyness that made us poets in the first place, the muse found a place for us to have a voice, I'm sure. It is hard when you pour your heart and soul out for others to see, I was there too. I'm still shy, I must confess. God, in His mercy has given us a voice in poetry <3 I'm glad He led you to my pages, I think you and I are kindred spirits. When I vanish on here know, it is hard to break free from being the shadow in the doorway, sometimes I just clam up, close the door and immerse myself in the busy life of mom, wife, grandma, everything in between, and getting a grip on health conditions. But as far as writing, I'll feel like a shadow again, till I'm not ;) As poets, maybe others relate to this phenomenon. I never thought I'd share online, but here I am, and here you are :) I am so glad to know you my friend <3
Hind Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 7:06 PM
Amazing write, I loved it- true muse to the unseeing quiet, wonderful, <3
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 12:56 AM
Thank you Paige :) <3
Maverick Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:43 PM
It echoes this write B J... Keep exploring and sharing..All blessings.)
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 12:57 AM
Thank you Joe, blessings to you as well :)
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