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As Poets

As poets we map out our lives For the entire world to see I do believe the reason why It's our words that set us free As I read other poets words It's very clear to me There are many hearts on earth As beautiful as can be So as we face another trial And overcome another test By the Blood of the Lamb Lets give the world our best

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Donald Meikle

Date: 7/29/2008 3:05:00 PM

It's like designing a boat, every line has to be true.

James Foulk

Date: 7/28/2008 7:43:00 AM

a very wonderful moving piece of poetry and well said. i like the line there are many hearts on earth as beautiful as can be. thank you for your kind comments on my poetry and for your kind words about me, on this poem site, we are one kind of people, that is poets, that is one thing we have in common.

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/28/2008 6:51:00 AM

Oh Michael, this says so much, and so beautifully! Excellent. Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 7/27/2008 11:46:00 PM

Your phrase 'It's our words that set us free'Michael are so profound and is a key to PS success.Rgds Brian & thanks for your very welcome comments

Christy Hardy

Date: 7/27/2008 6:15:00 PM

Your words reflect your beautiful heart...Always, Christy

Date: 7/27/2008 5:57:00 PM

Love the last line in this one. What an inspirational vision of writing. Nice use of rhyme. Thank you for sharing you optimism with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Karen

Ronald Bingham

Date: 7/27/2008 1:20:00 PM

Amen to that brother. Poetry to me is a way to share my testimony and help to spread the good news, blessings, Ron

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/27/2008 12:45:00 PM

Give the world our best and then share it with the rest. Excellent rhyme and so very true my friend! Michael