As of soul agreement

Forgive me dear heart,
for a moment, lost in trance,
I saw not light of your soul.


Our separation
is but a part in the script
we both chose to enact here.
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March 4, 2024 at 6:27 AM
An outstanding sedoka with depth of meaning, Seeker. I appreciated your answer to the comment below, as it enhanced the reading experience for me. Regards, Suzette
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March 4, 2024 at 5:50 PM
Thank you, Suzette dear, God bless
Rodgers Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Dearest US, Your words hold a poignant mix of regret and acceptance, the understanding that the soul's connection remains even in temporary separation. It's a beautiful reminder of the bigger picture we write together. - Blessings, Daniel
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February 27, 2024 at 7:52 AM
It’s more to do with lack of awareness of truth actually. We look at outer form, not spirit. This is our ignorance. He who we think is our adversary, may have only taken up that role as of mutual agreement at soul level to impart teaching but now, on earth, we have forgotten about it, since we are in trance, mistakenly believing we are only body-mind.
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