As My Life Flashes Before My Eyes

As my life flashes before my eyes,
slowly going into darkness before I die;
everyone around me is praying and crying.

My sweetheart takes my hand in his;
back, he and I walked alone
in that Autumn Day,
to the sound of bird's melodious tone.

My heart raised to the sky
as he nestled his hands around my face
and kissed me gently.

Back, while he stood by my side,
as I labored with our first child.
Eyed the pureness of the little red face as he cried.

Back, to the tender moments as we sat around
the Christmas tree exchanging gifts to the sounds
of laughter of our grandchildren.


My empty vessel lays there as I hovers high hand in hand with my sweetheart.
11/21/2021 Your Life Flashes Before Your Eyes Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri
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Dubey Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 7:32 AM
This was so beautifully written.Lovely poetry Eve.
Proxenos Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 12:25 AM
This poem my dear friend Evie, is full of beautiful thoughts and memories which you bring to life with your awesome talent. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
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November 22, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Oh this is absolutely beautiful Eve. I think it's the way most of us would like to go. I know I would. Beautiful. A fave for me. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
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November 22, 2021 at 4:31 AM
Lovely thoughts, a vision of love. God bless you always - Love, Gina
Krutsinger Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:56 PM
Ahh This is so beautifully penned, Eve. You never disappoint!
Wolf Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 7:10 PM
Well-penned, Eve... I was just watching a movie where a schoolgirl almost jumped off of a skyscraper in Manhattan... Talk about a Life flashing before one's eyes... Heavy thoughts. :) gw
Poet Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 12:44 PM
This is a great piece of writing that has a lot of impacts. Eve, you've had a lifetime of lovely experiences that will remain with you eternally. Best for a win.
Cunningham Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 12:36 PM
A lifetime of precious memories that stay with you forever Eve. Tom
Sands Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Well written Eve! I can see it and feel it :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:05 AM
wow, Eve, this is VERY powerful writing. In my eyes, a real winner!!!
Romios Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Beautiful, Eve! May you be top winner! Love, Panagiota Trauma center, getting out, this Tuesday. Happy Thanksgiving, Eve,
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 10:44 AM
such precious memories Eve, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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November 21, 2021 at 10:10 AM
A memory not easily forgotten. Hugs ~~
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