As Memory Serves

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As Memory Serves A mere bump in time... as bottled cork pops, engaged second hand... conveyed decibels, dons melting, against that instant, "It's a boy!", resonates. Reflecting after those many years, I smiled while he blows... his 44th candled flame, ~~best is poured. gifted memories timelessly bottled uncorks ~~aged wine stirs in ice 2020 June 30

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2020 10:22:00 PM

a wonderful memory, William. Seems like we have kids the same age!! Speaking of Bdays. Today is my hubbie's!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/1/2020 10:29:00 PM

My firstborn during my second year in college--Congratulations to yours truly, Andrea -- Aloha~@William

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/1/2020 1:11:00 PM

Just like a good aged mind, so the heart when aged remembers the luminous moments of birth and living, thank you for this very special poem, Have a blessed day xo

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/1/2020 2:50:00 PM

Charming to the end, so truly grateful for your sharing kindness, blessings -- Aloha~@William

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/30/2020 3:21:00 PM

love how you set this one up and the content within... a winner in my eyes already... great write William :) hugs

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/30/2020 3:59:00 PM

Truly pleased with your constant kindness, Sandra, many thanks -- Aloha~@William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/30/2020 6:11:00 AM

What a splendid recall of adoring memory my friend. Loved the voice of this charming write, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/30/2020 3:50:00 PM

I am very grateful and appreciative for your thoughtful words, Vijay -- Aloha~@William