As Love Takes Hold

Feeling my heart pound in my chest: I knew you were not like the rest. And ignoring the rules that mold: our souls combine: as love takes hold. In love with love; I'm never bored, for on its wings: my hopes have soared. And I don't ever question why: for what I feel's hard to deny. I've found an Angel to adore; and don't feel anxious anymore. For merging with my heart and soul, you leave me feeling loved and whole. Trust, purged my heart of fear and doubt, 'cause that's what trust is all about. And feeling loved makes my heart sing, for you're my world, my everything.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Sweet, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:47 AM
Such an uplifting poem, Emile. Just so lovely!!
Pinet Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Carole, I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem...Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Bateman Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Hello Emile, This one is a truly marvelous write. The smooth flow of the rhyme and the imagery throughout the four stanzas add to the passion and power of this wondrous narrative. True Love is at the base of all that's good and wonderful in a meaningful relationship. Very Well-Done, and A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Pinet Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Gary, your comments and support are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Hi Emile, a passionate and romantic write. Excellent rhyme and rhythm with great imagery. I truly enjoyed your poem tonight! :)
Pinet Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Thank you Susan, I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem...Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 4:41 PM
I really enjoyed this today Emile. Very nicely done! :)
Pinet Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Thanks Heidi, I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem...Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Capitano Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Simply beautiful Emile, fabulous rhyme and flow. Your lover is a lucky one to have such sentimentality on display.
Pinet Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Thanks Phil, I feel like I'm the lucky one...Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
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