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As your heart beats against my chest, its rhythmic waves caress my breast. And ignoring the rules that mold, our souls combine as love takes hold. In love with love, I'm never bored, for, on its wings, my hopes have soared. And I don't ever question why; for feelings are hard to deny. I am not lonely anymore, I've found an angel I adore. And committing his heart and soul, he leaves me feeling loved and whole. Trust purges me of fear and doubt, for that's what trust is all about. And because love's all that matters, it's a bond that never shatters. (Rhyme) 9/7/2017

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Date: 5/25/2018 8:03:00 PM
Sweet, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/4/2017 12:47:00 AM
Such an uplifting poem, Emile. Just so lovely!!
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Date: 10/4/2017 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Carole, I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem...Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2017 12:21:00 PM
Hello Emile, This one is a truly marvelous write. The smooth flow of the rhyme and the imagery throughout the four stanzas add to the passion and power of this wondrous narrative. True Love is at the base of all that's good and wonderful in a meaningful relationship. Very Well-Done, and A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2017 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Gary, your comments and support are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/7/2017 8:28:00 PM
Hi Emile, a passionate and romantic write. Excellent rhyme and rhythm with great imagery. I truly enjoyed your poem tonight! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/8/2017 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Susan, I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem...Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/7/2017 4:41:00 PM
I really enjoyed this today Emile. Very nicely done! :)
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Date: 9/8/2017 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem...Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/7/2017 3:52:00 PM
Simply beautiful Emile, fabulous rhyme and flow. Your lover is a lucky one to have such sentimentality on display.
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Date: 9/8/2017 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Phil, I feel like I'm the lucky one...Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.

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