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written in unrhymed tercets ten lines as one line crowns the title 

and line nine is the longests to fire up the clouds 

It brings warmly new energy crowning 
as the sunshine smiles from out of these eyes 
enlightened transforming everything inside out 

Wings flutter in a vision possession held candlelight 
Beholding grace of a thousand swans in flight 
Pure is the starlight that radiates sweet flower 

Angel rays sparkling magic dust twinkling diamond crystals 
Held captive one kiss silver lining clouds breathless storm 
beautiful breathes out whispers carried on the wind blown away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/9/2018 2:06:00 PM
Liam, “beautiful breathes out whispers carried on the wind blown away” a poem that generates energy beginning to end...well done!
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Date: 2/9/2018 7:09:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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