written in unrhymed tercets ten lines as one line crowns the title
and line nine is the longests to fire up the clouds
It brings warmly new energy crowning as the sunshine smiles from out of these eyes enlightened transforming everything inside out Wings flutter in a vision possession held candlelight Beholding grace of a thousand swans in flight Pure is the starlight that radiates sweet flower Angel rays sparkling magic dust twinkling diamond crystals Held captive one kiss silver lining clouds breathless storm beautiful breathes out whispers carried on the wind blown away
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