As long as I see the sky

as long as I see the sky, I know gods looking down on me.
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December 23, 2024 at 1:51 PM
John, I'm certain you know the universe is shining upon you. And if it were not, you would have some of us poets to watch what you are doing. Thanks for being such an interesting and philosophical person. It's a pleasure to read your work. Smiles!
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December 24, 2024 at 1:14 AM
Thank you Duke for your heartwarming comments have a wonderful Christmas and a healthy new year God bless.
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November 30, 2024 at 9:40 AM
Back with my congrats on you wonderful one liner
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November 30, 2024 at 11:10 AM
Thank you dear Andrea.
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November 29, 2024 at 6:30 AM
- Congratulations on your winning line, John :) - hugs
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November 29, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations to you as well Anne. xx
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November 28, 2024 at 6:33 PM
congratulations dear poet. pious write. 'to know'-so well written.cheers.
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November 29, 2024 at 8:18 AM
Hi Thriveni sending my congratulations to you as well.
Romios Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 2:35 PM
So comforting and beautifuuly said, Had to correct my spelling, soort Pangiexx always feel free to let me know if I spell something wrong. I have a problem s with my vision. 1/6/2925
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November 22, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Hi Pangie, thank you for your visit
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November 20, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Yes, even when we can't get out, He is still looking down on us or sees from within us..I enjoyed reading this one. I have seen several of these also, so there must have been a contest with this theme. Sara K
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November 20, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Hi Sara, yes there was a contest but the result hasn't been published yet.
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November 14, 2024 at 10:38 AM
Beautiful Monoku
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November 14, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Thank you Karen God bless you. Xx
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 10:44 PM
... And looks as if the poetry gods are looking up to you.
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November 11, 2024 at 8:07 AM
I Gershon quite a few are looking down on me lol.
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November 10, 2024 at 3:13 AM
This is such a beautiful and spiritually cosmic monoku! Whenever we find ourselves in the chaos of this world and look at those skies which hint of serenity ~ we are blessed with the guidance of the Almighty whose divine aura can shield us from all the miseries. Wonderfully evoked sentiments here!
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November 10, 2024 at 3:47 AM
Thank you Hiya for your heartwarming comment, it's so much appreciated God bless you.
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November 7, 2024 at 5:28 AM
Dear John, Yes, our God is looking down on us. What a beautiful Monoku! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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November 7, 2024 at 9:44 AM
I wonder if God's happy with what he sees, thank you for your visit and comment Daniel.
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November 7, 2024 at 5:01 AM
Nice :)
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November 7, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Thank you Kim your nice as well.
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November 6, 2024 at 6:48 PM
John, a wonderful monoku, best of luck in the contest.
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November 7, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Thank you Tania I do need a little luck at the moment. Xx
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November 6, 2024 at 3:44 PM
Such a lovely spiritual thought
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November 7, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Thank you Andrea God bless you.
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November 6, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Beautiful and so well written and I think many would resonate, and i definitely feel this too, many times when lost, and feeling alone, somehow the sky does remind me that God is with me. Pleasure reading, dear John. Best wishes. Sending you light~
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November 6, 2024 at 1:54 PM
Thank you Ink your comments are much appreciated God bless you.
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November 6, 2024 at 1:10 PM
- Lovely written, John :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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November 6, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Anne, so nice hearing from you God bless you.
Anaya Avatar
November 6, 2024 at 12:11 PM
Perfect for all, John. GL!
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November 6, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Thank you Anaya for your visit and comment God bless you.
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November 6, 2024 at 10:18 AM
Another great entry for the contest John, I see it's your first one, best of luck in the contest, Tom
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November 6, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Cheers Tom, for your kind words and visit. John
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November 6, 2024 at 9:31 AM
A very nice Monoku brother John, the sky is a wonder, gifted from God to man… Sis Beryl
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November 7, 2024 at 10:21 AM
I agree Beryl
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November 6, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Never put yourself down, you’re a poet and your poetry is profound… Sis Beryl
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November 6, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Hi sister Beryl, it's my first attempt at a Monoku, it's sure to receive a N/A lol.
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