As Long As I Am Alive

As long as I am alive....... Always, your soul reside in my heart Our love is not like gloomy, bright like sunshine We share our wonderful feelings without hesitation I immerse you completely into me when you give me yourself You purified my soul and brought out my emotions I never knew that your love will bring out my real life There's so much love unfolding from my heart and its need your love to free from my loneliness Sometimes its aches because we are far apart Sometimes tears slips down my face because your part of my bed is vacant and kept me sad A kiss on my lips could wet my heart with heaviness I will always love you even when the rain wash me out or the sun burns me out or the winds takes me away As long as I am alive, my love for you will not die. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved
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Jones Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 8:22 PM
This just tore at my heart with its beauty....
Carrillo Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 8:05 PM
This is beautiful Ravi. i can tell it came from the heart. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 7:40 PM
very emotional and heartfelt poem. such a great love!!
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated Andrea. Hugs Ravi
Dunn Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 3:38 PM
A sad but beautiful write full of emotion and so touching thank you for sharing. cheri I'm so glad you enjoy my lone universe poem thank you my friend for your comment.
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Haick Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 8:19 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Ravi! Simply beautiful, straight from the heart! Excellent! Always, Annalise
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Hendricks Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 3:26 PM
Beautiful, Ravi. I hope you read this out loud to the person it was written for. Nice one, my friend. Licia :-)
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 12:39 PM
Some lucky person will enjoy getting this romantic work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Adams Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 8:42 AM
such a lovely heartfelt poem...a love like that never dies...enjoyed this one today :)
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:02 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Onclaud Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 8:05 AM
you speak from a heart full of devotion, ravi... lovely piece and lovely expression of what lies in your heart!..:) huggs
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:02 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 7:19 AM
- I think there is plenty of room in your heart to everlasting love for your loved ones, Ravi - Beautiful poem!! - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 7:24 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Love and hugs Anne.
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